Immortal Thought (original)

first song ive ever finished haha.. was lazy and used a webcam so i appologize for poor quality. lyrics below:

I got a monster on my mind,
and it's tearin me up inside
everything's become a blur,
cuz the monster has made me blind

I got a monster on my back,
and it's taking my life off track
there isn't much that I can do
When I've lost everything there was to lose

CHORUS
I got no monsters in the closet
No monsters under the bed
The only monster that I know
Is the one that's in my head
And when I try to wish him dead
He gets right back up and says
"man, you'll always be a lonely guy"


I got a monster in my soul
And it's making me lose control
I knew you were the one for me
And when you left I lost all sanity

CHORUS
I got no monsters in the closet
No monsters under the bed
The only monster that I know
Is the one that's in my head
And when I try to wish him dead
He gets right back up and says
"man, you'll never be good enough for her"

BRIDGE
oh can you tell me what I'm supposed to see
After you took that last look at me
the day that you said goodbye
was the day the monster came alive
and when I told you how I felt,
you were hesitant and dwelt
on the reasons why I couldn't be
the one for you and you for me.

SOLO

Now this immortal thought is
Getting me distraught
Why won't this monster ever die?

Category:

Music

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• original
• song
• arpeggio16
• immortal
• thought
• guitar
• ukulele
• bass
• vocals

[DKMaher13]

This is a great original song. OK it's got some glitches but the lyrics are very clever, the melody is super catchy. I love when the bass comes in, perfect timing. Well worth sharing, it's a very entertaining song / video. I added your video to the "Ukulele Originals 2" playlist on The Songwriters Collection Channel.....Kathy

[arpeggio16]

@DKMaher13 thanks! yea i need to fix it up a bit and maybe redo it at some point but its a work in progress that was just the first take

[trumpetmaster5505]

I could easily hear this on the radio right now!

[paddyabo]

Awesome song...

[octave121]

christopher. this is so good!! awesome job :)

[asciidan]

Nice job! Catchy tune!

[Snipefox]

I LOVE IT BRO its mad Catchy...I actually have the rythm in my head DAMN YOUUUU hahahah jk its awesome thumbs up! :D

[mishrathium]

This is fantastic! Great job brother! ~Raz