Secret (A JB Story) Chapter 1

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**Make sure you read the Intro first!!**

Chapter 1

*Rachel's POV*

*Man, I LOVE half days!! Seriously I was able to have lunch with my friends but it sucks that they were all busy for the rest of the afternoon. Its only 12:30pm and Jessica's bus doesnt get to the bus stop until 3:00pm. I'm sooo bored, I guess I can listen to my iPod on the front porch. As I was walking onto the porch I saw a car pull up across the street. I'm so glad we got new neighbors, the other ones were so obnoxious. I saw a little boy jump out of the car and bolt into the house. What a little cutie. Then I saw his mom unloading groceries, they've only been here like 4 days, it looks like she is going to drop her bags. I got up and ran over to help her.*

*Normal POV*

*Rachel runs over to help the woman and they walk into the house talking.*
?: Oh my goodness, thank you so much.
Rachel: No problem, it looked like your groceries were going to be all over the street.
?: Well, yes they would have, thank you...
Rachel: Oh, I'm sorry, My name is Rachel.
?:Well thank you Rachel you can call me Denise. [AN. fans should already know her last name lol.]
Rachel: Well Denise how was your move?
*They talk for a while and get to know each other [AN. Boring conversation]*
?:Mommy I want a snack!! *to Rachel* Who are you??
Denise: Franklin don't be rude, Rachel this is my youngest son Frankie, Frankie this is our new neighbor Rachel.
Frankie: Hi. Mom can I have a snack, Pleeease!* puppy dog face*
Rachel:*laughs*
Denise: Sure.
*She gives him fruit snacks and he runs down the hall again.*
Rachel: He is so adorable.
Denise: Yea well..*laughs*
*about an hour later*
?: Mom were home!!! *A deep voice called out from the front door*
Denise: Oh that must be my other boys.*to her sons* We're in the living room!
?: Who's we* they stopped mid sentence as they walk into the room and saw Rachel.*
Denise: Boys, this is Rachel, she lives across the street.
*Rachel shakes each of their hands as they introduce themselves*
?:Hi, I'm Nick.
?:I'm Kevin.
?:And I'm Joe, nice to meet you.
Rachel: *to all 3 boys* Hi, nice to meet you too.
Frankie:*comes running into the room* Raaachel!!! I drew you a picture.
Rachel: Awww, thanks little man, is this me and you?
Frankie: Yeah, best friends.
Rachel: *laughs* Best friends. *high fives him* Thank you so much Frankie, I love it.*gives him a big hug*
Rachel: I'm so sorry Denise I have to go meet my sister at the bus stop, its 2:50pm.
Denise: Of course honey, I'll talk to later* gives her a hug*
Rachel: *walking out the door* Bye everyone!
Everyone: Bye!
*Rachel walks out the door and put her headphones in as she walks the two streets to the bus stop. She leans against a big tree while waiting and begins to sing along with her favorite song, Lovebug. She is interrupted by a big yellow bus pulling up along the curb.*

Quote of the Chapter: "The beginning is the most important part of work."~Plato(I think it kind of fits.)

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[AN. Okay, so that was bad and really boring, but leave a comment anyway and let me know what you think.
PS. I'm not sure when the next one will be up because I'm like really sick and I didn't go to school today because of it but we'll see. Also, Lovebug really is my favorite song. What is your favorite song from the Jonas Brothers new album?? Also, I think I am going to put random quotes or ones that fit with the chapter, random words with definitions or historical facts. Let me know what you think.
~Rachel aka depplove23]

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  • wasn't boring at all, more of a refresher. :]]

  • thanks :p

  • OMG YOUR A PERSON!!!

  • what?

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  • Wow, her favorite song is Lovebug, by the Joe, Nick, and Kevin Jonas, aka the Jonas brothers who have a mom named Denise and a little brother named Frankie, and she didn't realize she was talking to them. Crazyness. Makes for an interesting story though, I gotta admit.

  • my fave songb is SOS

  • Oh you have a ways to go...I have up to Chapter 29 posted and some chapters are really long, 1 or 2 of them have 5 parts.

    And I'll post at least Chapter 30 by Monday.

    I hope you like it and make sure to comment on whatever chapters you like, or all of them. I like to see what people think & it makes me happy. =D

  • I'm workimng on it almost up to your most recent. I'm at the truth or dare chapter lol interesting...very interesting.

  • =D Thanks.

    Have you read the other chapters?

  • I can't pick a favorite!! They are all good but if i had too like my life depened on it...A little bit longer definitely!

    Good story WAY better than mine lol

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