A rough draft of a video I made for my digital ethnography class touching on the significance of different forms of media in our lives. I am one of a team of undergraduate students at Kansas State University working under Professor Michael Wesch.
Friendly comment: Cut out the first 30 seconds - nothing happens and I almost didn't have the patience to continue. Also, the text of the audio (quotes) is interesting, but your visuals do little to add to the text. Perhaps a bit of irony, something to provide counterpoint to the text and what you are trying to say. best of luck.
Hey what's this song title?
mah9999 4 years ago
Nicely done montage. I think you could put in more BRoll in some areas to keep the pacing up with the music.
mah9999 5 years ago
Friendly comment: Cut out the first 30 seconds - nothing happens and I almost didn't have the patience to continue. Also, the text of the audio (quotes) is interesting, but your visuals do little to add to the text. Perhaps a bit of irony, something to provide counterpoint to the text and what you are trying to say. best of luck.
immeris 5 years ago