Spoken Poetry: One of those...

I hella cheated and put it into cut parts. Haha due to lack of smooth flowin' skills. workin on it tho.

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[jayraydntplay]

haha. "i guess that's why they call it whore moans" -NiCE! "snaps fingers"

[meeemzsays]

@jayraydntplay ahaha. I love wordplaaaay. Thanks

[Yesnog05]

I gotta be honest, I was transported here when I was surfing for Nujabes/Substantial videos. I like this piece, really well done! Your flow wasn't so bad either, you really did a good job, just that the cut near the end was a downer =T

Stay Classy!

[meeemzsays]

@Yesnog05 Ah yeahhh. Mos' def was a downer. I did this piece spontaneously out of boredom aha and found myself so frustrated with constant re-takes that I was like 'fuck this' and just ended up parting it = =. Aha, I haven't posted any recent ones but I feel that I've improved in a continuous flow type thing. Thanks for the compliments :) And Nujabes all the way man, what an honor to be stumbled upon while searching for quite an artist.

[greaval]

i like your poetry but not the same about your topic. you're saying us guys are after girls just for sex. i know it's kinda true and sad too. guys don't crave and want sex because they actually want a kid from it. its just by nature we get this uncontrolable urge. that's why guys chase after them even as much trouble it is trying to impress a girl and win her over. ever heard "girls ain't nothing but trouble"? that's kinda where it comes from. i could speak some poetry about you girls too.

[meeemzsays]

@greaval

I understand yeah. I actually expected some comments like this .But you need to know that this poem is not directed to all guys, only some of them that I know. These guys were I guess my 'inspiration' to write this poem? I understand that there's other guys out there who aren't like this. I have a few good friends who aren't actually. But this is simply a rant. And Yes, I agree girls can be pretty messed up too. Bah, trust me I know. But apologies if you may have been offended.

[Yesnog05]

@meeemzsays High Five for finding another Nujabes fan! :D

[michael89797]

jus stoped by to say...ur very talented..and extremly beutiful

[ggsmiles]

loved it miel!

keep it up! it's hella smooth <3