Ophelia's Soliloquy from Act 3, Scene 1 from Hamlet
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@jasonsanto Thanks for such an in-depth comment. I took @ruzickaw's suggestion as well as others (some conflicting) and made an improved soliloquy. The link to that is in the description box. I appreciate your feedback.
- Lisa
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Nice work on this, but do heed the good critique by @ruzickaw. His recommendations are solid, specifically your not looking at the camera. If you can, get someone to work the camera for you and actually have the camera follow you as you deliver this, perhaps pacing a bit. This is someone speaking to herself, she wouldn't be pleading so much as decrying the misery of her situation. It's a great selection, and you've got the right emotions at play, but it can be played in a less conventional way.
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@ruzickaw Thank you for watching the new video. I appreciate the time you have given watching and commenting on my videos! :) Also, do you think, if you haven't done so already, you could watch our channel's video: "COVER CONTEST - Temporary Fix - Veronica Balletrini" and "like" the video? Please share that to your friends (facebook OR youtube) and tell them to like the video! :) Thanks! If you cannot do so at this time, we totally understand!! No pressure!! :)
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SparsileStars 2 weeks ago 2
tis is good, may I ask how old you are?
noigirl 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
@noigirl Thank you very much. We don't like revealing our ages online for privacy reasons. Sorry. I have made another version of this soliloquy if you would like to check it out! :)
SparsileStars 1 month ago
@SparsileStars Ahh okay no worries . yes i watched it i like them both, the second seems more considerd, but i feel your more in the moment in this one.
noigirl 1 month ago
@noigirl Well, thanks so much for watching both of them and giving that wonderful piece of feedback! :)
SparsileStars 4 weeks ago
Exuberant !
liwainstitut 1 month ago
@liwainstitut Thanks for watching.
SparsileStars 1 month ago