Gen's drunken DEBAUCHERY poem -- WrittenInWord Skyping with DavidRandallCurtis

I have a poetry chapbook loaded with illustrations that comes with 2 dvds of me doing spoken word.
It is available at: http://www.filmbaby.com/films/4408
--or private message me. Email is: b8888a@aol.com

Subscribe to Gen at: http://www.youtube.com/user/writteninword
And at her other channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/aGoodTempo
I had written a script for a collab with Gen where we would be on Skype and
she would read her poem in the middle of it. I told her it would be funny if she was drinking
and had had two cigarettes going at once.

After about 7 or 8 takes, and Gen downing a lot of Jagermeister shots, we finally got
A take that seemed to work. By that time the booze was starting to hit
Gen. I just let the video record and didn't let Gen
know—so what you see here is unscripted and a lot funnier than what I'd wrote
for her to say in the original planned video.

This video is posted with Gen's permission.
Gen's ultra cool poem:

DEBAUCHERY

Debauchery, descent into the darkness

I wanted to command the women
dancing in front of me.

Point my finger down at them
and make them dance for me.

Beer, cigarettes...

Tell me baby how you feel
when I put my tongue down there.

(By WrittenInWord AKA aGoodTempo AKA Gen)

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[Wilmrbadguy]

Damn dog the way you talk I bet you can talk a woman out of her panties, Dang she is really got drunk

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Wilmrbadguy: Ha... I've probably talked more women INTO their panties than out out of them... just not real ladies man... and Gen would kick my ass if I ever really tried to make a move on her! :p Thanks for the comment! I need to check out yer latest vids...

[IGrazor]

Very sneaky David - plying poor Gen with alcohol and secretly filming her. There was a point there I thought she might actually barf on camera. :D

Great poem Gen, and a very funny collaboration guys. 5*

[DavidRandallCurtis]

iGrazor: yeah, I never would have posted this without her seeing it first and giving me the okay... I wanted to post two videos --one of the scripted takes where the booze had not hit (I TOLD her to drink coke instead of Jag - yeesh) yet... but she thought that would be over kill... she is so sweet in here... and it is not acting... Gen is simply one of the nicest and most talented people on YT.... thanks for commenting...

[80stimeagain]

She's cute. ;)

[DavidRandallCurtis]

80's time: what am I? Chopped liver? :p

Thanks for commenting ; )

[RowanFortuneWood]

I was wondering when you would next upload something on YT. You seem to make a habit of encouraging YouTubians to drink.

Great poem and hilarious video. 5*/Fav

[BigPrairieDude]

This collaboration, did she agree to do it before or after you talked Gen into over drinking? You do have the gift. You smooth talker. Her poem is great. You played the part of the cad flawlessly. I presume from having taken acting classes and not from real life experience. A zillion*******

[cookieman38111]

Do you still talk to ms. Hodabes???

[cookieman38111]

Good vid.

[SpiritualAtheist]

"You can trust me." lol

[BETonthisHORSE]

coool

[Dharmadejavu]

...meh

[cookieman38111]

Does she have any good devilled egg recipes?

[santiagodevill]

i chust got one of those skype thingy's that all you young hip kid's ar gowing crazy for.

[dashpoet]

Moist. One of my favourite words! Good to catch up with you David, and hear more of Gen's confident poetry.