Bittersweet Symphony Rap Remix (Freeverse)

quick freeverseeeeee!

http://www.youtube.com/yell0wface
http://www.myspace.com/aytune

Lyrics:

yo listen up i know its just a theory of the man
but they say that when you lose your sight your hearing gets enhanced
but im blind coz im asian and my ears havent advanced
cause they say that theyre better but they clearly have no chance
cause my lyrics have a stance that is too long for ya
or maybe its the way i make em 2 fonts taller
cause i love to write big, never did i light shit
but if i catch on fire know ill keep the mic still
cause im writing shit like "always", all my pads advancing
so once again ill say it, you have no chance kid
the traffic light is red, but i still flow, still go
been passively ahead and this has been your intro
coz when the beat drops then you know i'ma start
i never come with weak songs for you to recite and blog
i be speeding on the freeway going twenty over
easily ill switch lanes to run emcees over
and this is from a kid who only has his G1
imagine later on when i have my G, son
considering the fact that i can earn a paycheck
coz i havent worked since the summer going to grade ten
i never think, coz i am not delaying
im giving birth to the game, you still ovulating
and if im not amazing, its simple all these haters
are something like a drunk bitch, unavailing
coz im all but basic, you should carefully listen
to the skills i possess before you share all your disses
i make it look so easy when you stare at a distance
but when you try it at home youll tear the hair that youre gripping
they say a beat is like a girl, out in the real world
coz you fall in love, then fuck her up and then you leave her
but im the type of dude to love and give appreciation
and even if im finished with the beat ill keep it playing
while these other rappers flow so adhesively
my words come smooth like i added heat to it
and for now all of my songs dont have a featured film
but i can flow acapella or add a beat to it
im making songs from the heart to keep the people entertained
unlike the artists for the cash, i dont wanna mention names
and if hip-hop ever dies ill be remaining dude
so i can keep you all in place, like retainers do
nothing's restraining you except these braces fused
with the fact that you cant move coz of your laced up shoes
so embrace the truth, instead of global lies
and start listening to the facts with an open mind
with an open eye, i know it might be tough
but if you see a homeless guy, let's divide our stuff
and that's real, coz currently these times are tough
and if the time equals currency, its twice as rough
but ima spit and hope i fit in the industry
coz im an asian, a chink who is simply skilled
i free my mind and let my lyrics seep into me
and get inspired by this bittersweet symphony

Category:

Music

Tags:

• a-tune
• bittersweet
• symphony
• rap
• remix
• freeverse

[6stringedcanon]

calm yourself, you fool no one.

[Yell0wFace]

reply back with something better or dont reply back at all. you got shitted on.

[6stringedcanon]

this dispute woulda subsided had you stopped replying or replied saying things to the tune of "you're right". but you embarrassed yourself giving those examples of multis, haha i wont blame you if you take that comment down.

[Yell0wFace]

its the VOWEL in the words that make them rhymable. learn about it. tell me how some professionals can rhyme "style" with "down". there ARE exceptions to the rule, dumbass. honestly, you piss me off coz youre an ignorant punk who doesnt know ANYTHING, and comes here and tries to talk to me like he does. just stop embarassing YOURSELF, for the love of God. oh and its the WHOLE multi that makes it rhyme, dumbass. "THEORY of the MAN/ HEARING gets enHANCED"

[Yell0wFace]

and "LIGHT SHIT/ MIC STILL" are the words that are rhymable in their VOWELS. it takes time to learn about these things so i dont blame you. i see you as a dumbfuck, not becoz youre new and know nothing, but becoz youre ignorant and know NOTHING about how to rhyme, but come here busting out shit like you do.

take a fucken seat and listen to how GOOD artists rhyme, flow, deliver, and rap in general, then come back to me.

[Yell0wFace]

listen to dumbfoundead, waxandherbalt, d-pryde, traphik, prince ea. theyre ALL from youtube and they ALL rhyme multisyllabic just as well as i do, and they ALL rhyme through the VOWELS, not the word itself, at times.

my multis are WAYYYYYYYYYY more complex than your nursery ones, so PLEASE GET YOUR FACTS STRAIGHT BEFORE YOU COME BACK WITH SOME MORE BULLSHIT. PEACE

[sqadron2386]

eh 

[dinkylicous1234]

i reckon u should be hired as a profesh lyric writer, no disrespect im just sayin u got talent with the pen :)

[springbokk4life]

Needs some work but respect i liked it. It's not the easiest song to write to.

[88psych]

hey man, i like your flow, it could use some work but what the hell do you mean by "free verse"

[XxKIDtemperxX]

what is wrong with all of you cant you say anything positive about him that was amazing

[iToySoldierx]

Nice :D 

[jrbaba101]

you fuckin suck

[feel194]

your wall's green.



[volunteernation16]

no

[Amber1025Nicole]

those are REALLY green walls......