Rain - A Fucked Up Situation (Beat Dr Dre - Big Egos)

A rap i wrote about a fucked up situation, hence the name. sorry the flows a bit shit, i guess i'm a better righter then i am a rapper (for now). let me know what you think, thanks.


Lyrics:

So listen up yeah if I so swore in the air where with like I dont care if it wasnt me
And I wasnt there then Im going down with a fake prayer and it aint fair put a taint
There as the saints stare didnt you hear and streetlight glare all for
Just a simple game of truth or dare

Her body Laid bear still on the ground she turns repetitively well you know she
Never learns its hereditary a predatory reaction like the subtraction of complex fractions
A transaction of inaction that She used as her distraction

And who the fuck knows it could have been you who did the very same isolated and alone and viewed slowly frame by frame a subtle sense of self the vile plight she slowly became they Told her all to small but they never gave her a name proclaim your flame domain its an

Insane and some would say deranged and fucked up game but compared to the shit
That goes on in her brain to clearly and slowly carefully clarify her aim she knows how she got there but she cant remember which way she came

Who do you blame where comes the shame from those she never even met and through the shadows she crept met a ratchet and vile concept by shattered glass and half torn a bag of blue crystal meth a simple story death or glory met with bated breath

The stage is set to connect the steps of her regret let the net cast to move the first peace on the devils chess set to finally pay her debt with a reckless gamblers bet just a syncs laugh to hide the tears that inside she wept

And then he told her of mice and men when and the best made plans just a prophecy written by god in the devils lonely hands the strands of mans demands to withstand and expand this grand land from Franz Ferdinand to north Korea and Iran
But she misunderstands and takes it to mean shes going to hell so she grabs her knife and meets him where the devils angels fell

By cobble stone paved steps where daemons dare not dwell
Where the streets meet with a swore leak and a gone off smell

And its easy to tell he stands there in the cold dark ally just waiting to be made obsolete like Silicon Valley she steps out of the shadows street wise like Thomas OMalley she breaks the bottle on his face preparing for her ground finally

He falls to his knees begs pleads which leads him to bleed as she reeds his wicked

Deeds then he concedes his creed to lead mortal men succeed but he misleads then

She proceeds to reveal that he was concisely deceived diseased with greed she

Impedes his needs to exceed she supersedes with entangled weeds then turns to
Leave the beads of sweat that drip from his forehead to his neck as she turns around
To ask what was his only regret the moon cries and dark grey clods fill the night sky

The ground is dry but she knows his mind is oh so sly why dose he still deny his

Teeth clench as he bleeds from his her eye she dears him to die why ask why she

Tenderly lies removing his disguise he draws a gun and points it to her

Surrounded by the cold enchanted night that slowly consumed her a vision in her minds eye more perfect then Eketahuna as she closed her eyes knowing that he looked right through her

Shes intrepid to repeat but her feet wont let her retreat thats too neat
The masters prophecy now almost complete
Now she competes to defeat but in her mind she moons of cold instead of the Heat she stands beside the dim light street lamp that he lies beneath

What dose she seek just subtle beats the leak of times broken sand

Theres nothing left for her to see thats taken from her secret land

She gazes too the ground still looking down expand her plan so grand

Then she looks up again back up at him the gun now in her hand

She otters gently as he looks at her and she stares back at he

Would you believe me if I promos that I would never deceive thee

She takes two steps away but he cries out dont leave me

Its too easy only you my fickle friend can fucking free me

She draws the gun between his eyes but hesitates before the true bit
Then a soft voice in the back of her ear whispers do it
She stands above his bleeding body as he begs for his life he tries to grab light but she kicks him back into the night it was her birthright

And right before she pulls the trigger thinking of his cues of strife
She ponders madness against sadness and to his feet she throws the knife
And as he struggles through the cabals in his eyes she sees delight
But then the trigger gives relive there and there ends his worthless life

Category:

Music

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• Rap
• Rapper
• Hip
• hop
• Fucked
• Up
• Situation
• Dr
• Dre
• 2001
• Chronic
• Big
• Egos
• Eminem
• hip
• Gangster
• Gangsta

[phunkphresh209]

Once again you manage to fuck a perfectly good beat up jeezuz christo do ur self a favor guy n quit this shit already...real talk tho

[JackMoranRain]

@phunkphresh209 Thanks for the feedback man, but could you be a bit more specific. What exactly didn't you like? the lyrics, the content, we're you able to follow what they we're about? and if so is that what you didn't like about it? i guess what i'm trying to say is be a bit more constructive, it would help me out allot. thanks, have a nice day.

[nickatnight287]

for real bro dats some fuckin talent u got...i like to come up w/flows myself but none of em compare to yours..i aint bad n ive had people compliment me on my flows b4 but i could never imagine being able to spit like u do..its seriously amazing to hear the words u use n how quickly your able to make em flow together n make since all at the same time n i fuckin envy u bro..u seriously need to get up w/someone whos got a studio n can throw down some sick ass original beats for ya n make some cd's

[JamesDeansGirl1]

Jesus christ.. this one's mind blowing. I love the "Just do it" and 2:57..I think you should make a proper surreal music video for this rap. Best lines: "Theres nothing left for her to see thats taken from her secret land" and "To ask what was his only regret the moon cries and dark grey clods fill the night sky "

I like when music tells a story.

[LaMotteSwag]

Terrible

[ezseedy]

Good lyrics ... That's all ...

[Unicorn22324]

BRITISH GUYS CANT RAP!!!!!!

[Mx5322]

You are the worst rapper ever. Do me a favor and stop fucking up good beats

[chazzywatto]

immortal technique meets white boy!!

[iAmTwistedd]

Cool, Check my channel for crazy remixes and Hot beats

[jacksite2007]

Yo he iz black mon!

[HARLEYPARMENTIER]

@JamesDeansGirl1 what are u black