iLovePhotos Elevator Pitch
Uploader Comments (lorenzsell)
All Comments (27)
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funny... i never seen someone sitting in front of a computer in an elevator before.
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If you just so happen to meet someone in an elevator with some influence you gotta have an elevator pitch.
At first I thought"elevator pitch?... How to sell elevators?
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ehm, you talk clear, but... it's far 2 long my friend
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you sound like dane cook
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@lorenzsell visuals, green screens help too (its not difficult), 2 persons giving out information is fun to watch! (preferably a guy and a girl)... idk stuff! =)
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@lorenzsell tmi = too much info =)
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@lorenzsell tmi means 'too much information'
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@lorenzsell Give motion, show your hands. Just stand up.
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@tehCrasx Believing that a guy wearing pink isn't weird is a pitch in itself. It was hard to listen to what he was saying because the odd colored shirt distracted me. I don't really believe in the idea that men can wear anything women can... I'd rather not go into detail about it...
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@zander7x7 why is a pink shirt a turn off? stop letting gender roles control you.
Sorry was not convinced - seems like you are reading a teleprompter. Your weak point is that you're very factual (tmi) but do not convey any emotion. Who is your audience? Customers? Investors? Body language: your talk is "serious" but ur face says otherwise (ur talk is 2 articulated). We can see u bounce on ur chair and moving your hands, it shows enthusiasm but would be best if that was actually shown (and not through a window reflection). Anyway thanks for sharing - and good luck.
Startechgirl 1 year ago
@Startechgirl hey, that was great feedback. thank you. btw, what does "tmi" mean?
lorenzsell 1 year ago 3
you still talk too much. i lost you attention 20 seconds in
gtarbmx 2 years ago 3
how could i make it better?
lorenzsell 2 years ago