This is my first student film. A woman makes a deal with God that she will kill the man who raped her if she defeats him in a game of poker. Fun times.
I really like how you set up the poker game, some of story seems a little forced but other than that good job. I think the revealing of how the girl was raped should be set up a tad bit earlier or set up a little better. Oh and did you use the on-camera mic? Did you use a one chip dv cam? In the last shot the girl looked like someone from the matrix pulling that gun out lol. A little cheesy but I enjoyed it. Good job.
I really like how you set up the poker game, some of story seems a little forced but other than that good job. I think the revealing of how the girl was raped should be set up a tad bit earlier or set up a little better. Oh and did you use the on-camera mic? Did you use a one chip dv cam? In the last shot the girl looked like someone from the matrix pulling that gun out lol. A little cheesy but I enjoyed it. Good job.
Muybridgeisfalling 4 years ago
bold concept. It feels like the actors may be trying a little hard, but the card game is a cool touch...
Leivparton 5 years ago
It's really amazing you were there to witness it all and capture it on camera. After all, how often does a rape victim play poker with her abuser?
begundan 5 years ago