Bad acting. Camera angles were a bit boring. Good camera but every scene went by too fast, fast talking, no tension built up in each scene. No offense man but I'm trying to point out the reasons why this is amateur looking. Keep at it and try to build some tension. Also do retakes until your actors get it right.
The cinematography was strong here. The acting was pretty poor but it was definitely entertaining and caught my attention from the very first shots. I almost wish the story matched the quality seen in some of the shots. Good job overall
why did they have to kill the girl!!!!!????
markos4819 4 months ago
next thing you know, he barphs right next to a hot chick!!!! FAIL!!!
markos4819 4 months ago
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CMAproduction70 5 months ago
Bad acting. Camera angles were a bit boring. Good camera but every scene went by too fast, fast talking, no tension built up in each scene. No offense man but I'm trying to point out the reasons why this is amateur looking. Keep at it and try to build some tension. Also do retakes until your actors get it right.
FiveZylinderRacing 5 months ago
B-
huskyjerk 6 months ago
What an odd place for a file cabnet.....
lemmonsinmyeyes 9 months ago
Very nice! And I think the acting was better than average for an amateur film!
ragdolltwisty 9 months ago
The cinematography was strong here. The acting was pretty poor but it was definitely entertaining and caught my attention from the very first shots. I almost wish the story matched the quality seen in some of the shots. Good job overall
Revealski 9 months ago
Matrix and jumper?
jessixjealous 10 months ago
This is so much like the Matrix.
jessixjealous 10 months ago