ORIGINAL Collab "Open Door" nlowell1 / InuitAldebaran (Take 2)

The original song that this piece is built on is © nlwowell1
http://www.youtube.com/user/nlowell1

Lyrics, dominant melody and performance is © InuitAldebaran
http://www.youtube.com/user/InuitAldebaran

Open Door Lyrics:
***Refrain:
The door is open
and so are the windows
The roof is missing
and the floor where the wind goes

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Verses:
Today the newspapers 1
are all of blank sheets
They fill as i read them
Ideas become deeds

What is this breeze? 2
What is this chill?
I feel so uneasy
and at somebody's will




The walls - they are crumbling 3
My vision - it clears
Furniture's obsolete
or symbol for fears

My bed's a bear trap 4
and my chair's electric
but now all is clean
that once was septic

My shadow is hiking 5
Solar winds come to halt
They're giving my old friend
a lift from this vault

The water is rising 6
Sky falls on the night
Stars circle the moon
in all broad daylight

Horizons have folded 7
The spiral's a straight line
I'm loosing all knowledge
that ever was mine

A feeling's remaining 8
like floating on air
I levitate fearlessly
with joy hard to bear

My pen is a sword now 9
and flames are my ink
Fill my mind with its scrawling
ignoring the brink

A white cloud is settling 10
where my brain used to be
From my heart rain falls upwards
Each drop in essence is me

Hallelujah -- i'm singing 11
with lips sealed by bliss
now rendered able
to acknowledge the kiss

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Music

Tags:

• Original (song)
• Originality

[nlowell1]

This is a posting of the audio part of Jorg's (InuitAldebaran) video by the same name. Sadly that video was taken down by youtube because of copyright problems with the video portion. Between Jorg and I we own all of this video except the picture which is legal to use.

Jorg's original version received 10,000 hits before it was taken down and I'm hoping that his fans will find this one. With any luck the audio portion will carry it without need for video. Great lyrics and performance Jorg :o)

[InuitAldebaran]

Thank you, Norman, for saving this.

When i first heard this music i had to stop after two minutes to reach for a pen. Words started to flow into my mind. It is a wonderful feeling to be inspired. It doesn't happen to me every day.

So i hope this points out the INSPIRATIONAL quality of Norman's composition(s).

I always more heard a female and better voice on this. Feel free to give it a shot. The instrumental (and another song i would love to hear someone else's version) is a video response.

[nlowell1]

@InuitAldebaran Hey Jorg no need to thank me. This is all you. My music only has 680 views while your version reached 10,000 before it was taken down. I'd have been remiss in my duties as a youtuber if I just let this audio portion of your video just collect dust. This is your work. I just had a small part in it. Maybe eventually you can find a non copyrighted video to accompany it. It is your work so you might as well grab it from here and post a copy on your channel. You do own most of it :o)

[InuitAldebaran]

@TheBeestoncowboy

Yiiihaa!

[TheBeestoncowboy]

Good work very clever song writing....love it

Regards les

[BravuraK]

Wonderful wonderful.....Glad there was a take 2!

There is something special here ...

Must put in my favs!

Thanks Norman

Susan xx

[yllekr123]

Nice song!