Rain Dream Tower by Hitoshizuku
This was requested by ZenEspirit
EDIT: Extra stuff about Len's Love Dark Tower below romaji
The title really doesn't translate into a single word, so it's kind of ... I dunno.
I predicted the outcome before the title even showed up, but it's still really sad. It's the classic tale of the two friends who promise to stay together forever, but love gets in the way and the one left behind grows old and lonely. Still, the art is beautiful and so is the song. There's so much feeling in the voices too.
After reading this carefully and taking into consideration who said what, I think both girls regret what happened with Len. Rin fell in love with him, but he took Miku. She left, and eventually fell out of love with Len, and now she wants to go back but can't. Or something like that. But it seems like it didn't end well for either of them.
So anyway, as you can tell, this is a Kagamine/Hatsune Duet. I decided to be really nice and color the subs so you know who's singing, since they're kind of similar. I also think that knowing who sings what lines gives a little more to the story.
I'm translating songs to practice my Japanese grammar and get used to seeing kanji, so this translation may not be the most accurate, but I do try my best~ If you wanna tell me something that's wrong with the translation, go ahead, be brutal.
Romaji:
hakanai kotoba ne
mukae ni iku yo matteite
toki wo kasane kisetsu ga megutte mo mada
shinjite matteru
harari yuki ga mau yozora hokorobita kimono wo kite
furueru kata wo yoseau mazushii kodoku na osanago
akaruku warau hitomi wa utsumuki ureu hitomi wa
tagai no kizu wo utsushite ikiru koto wo chikatta
yoiyami ni sasou wa oiranzou
amai mitsu ni mau yoru no chou
kirei na kimono nabikasete
midarete sakasete
dareyori kagayaku hana ni natte miseru
nee hakanai kotoba ne
zutto issho ni iyou ne
kisetsu ga megutte otona ni natte mo mada
shinjite ii no
ano hi kara subete hajimatta
yuugure ni somaru yakusoku
sabishii kokoro kidzukarenu you ni
samenai yume ni oboreteru
tasogare ni somaru machi de hitoshirezu ni koi wo shita
omoi wo tsugeru koto sae kanawazu ni tada mitsumeru
yasashiku warau hitomi no saki ni hohoemu sono hana
mitsuyaka na koigokoro wa oto wo tatete kuzureta
omoi omoware ga toko yoru no shirabe
iro naki yami no gensou yo
aisareru no ga shiawase naraba
watashi wa anata wa
dare yori zutto shiawase na hazu na no ni
aa hakanai kotoba ne
mukae ni iku yo matteite
aishiteiru to iwareru tabi ni
ikiru kachi tashikamete
demo sorenara naze ima sugu ni
saratteittekurenai no
komiagetekita munashii sakebi wa
kotoba ni dekizu kieteitta
yoake to tomo ni kieteku nisemono no ai no mukuro
subete ga yume datta nara nakanai de irareta no ni
itsumademo matteru kara yoiyami ni chikatta yakusoku wa
hakanai hana to tomo ni kieta
tooi hi no yuugure yakusoku oboeteru
futari de narande arukou ne
kitto itsuka
aa hakanaku kietetta
karen na hana to hatsukoi yo
kisetsu ga megutte otona ni natte mo
naoranai kizuato nokoshite
yuugure no natsu no hi kanawanai yakusoku wo ima
watashi wa hitori tatta hitori de
ate mo naku machitsudzukeru
yuugure ni chikatta mama
subete ga yume datta nara
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So there's a sequel/answer song to this sung only by Len and called "Love Dark Tower". I found and translated it, but the translation won't fit here ._. I wrote a summary/commentary thing anyway.
Apparently, Len was using both Rin and Miku and chose Miku because she was the prettier one. (You can see that with the conflicting descriptions in stanzas) He felt love for both of the girls, but it was puppy love for Miku and real love for Rin. For some reason (I'm assuming looks, since he says "I want to love ALL of you") (and I'm assuming that's directed towards Miku) Len leaves Rin behind and buys(?) Miku because she's-hot-and that's-all-that-really-matters. He regrets it forever, and hopes to be with Rin again someday, when her contract ends (if there's an end to it).
On the girls' side, this song shows that Miku might not have been as sincere as Rin in their friendship. It appeared she was using Len to get out of that life(Len says that one of them would stare into a distance instead of at him while they...you know. I'm assuming that's Miku he's talking about.) and she succeeded. Rin on the other hand would stare deeply into his eyes with love because she really did love him.
So putting these together; Rin and Miku met as young girls and became friends, and entered prostitution due to poverty. Then along comes Len who uses both of them and falls in love with both, but he loves Rin for real. However, he decides to buy Miku and leaves Rin, regretting it for the rest of his life.
Of course, this is all my speculation, and would be cleared up with a PV. It would be pretty awesome if I'm right. : )
@xxakamaruxx Another interpretation: Len left without Miku, saying "I'm going to meet someone please wait" (but they were momentary words). So then Miku said the same thing to Rin (at the beginning) and left in search of Len, and that's why at the end of the song Rin sings "that unfulfilled promise" and she says that Miku is a "momentary flower." And when Miku sings of a false love, she is talking about Len's love for her. Now both Rin and Miku are waiting for someone to come back.
ZenEsprit 1 year ago 38
@Clover27
I might be wrong, but I don't think anyone fell in love with anyone. Both girls had a crush on Len, but he preferred Miku and told her he loved her probably because he liked her back and they were young. Miku went off with him, leaving Rin to miss her to pieces because she was her best friend. Rin grew up with Miku and they were probably used as a pair, so when she left so selfishly, Rin was all alone. Miku also might've been killed for running away and wasn't able to return.
Kisekikui 1 year ago 33