Shakespeare Sonnet XXIX
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CREEPY.
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Part 2:
The brilliant thing about the sonnet is that it can be read in many different ways. On its own, it can take on a brighter significance (when I'm a bit down, i think about you and realise how lucky I am) but as part of the collection, where the narrator is practically bipolar, it takes on a darker tone.
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It certainly starts off bitter and lonely but I don't think the narrator's poking fun at himself.
Perhaps it's because I've read the sonnets as a collection and so can trace the relationship, but to me this is a poem about unrequited love or love which cannot be- the narrator is insecure and at times wishes he didn't feel this way. But then his mind wanders onto thoughts of his love and he scorns his self-doubt. It is a relief.
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Wheee. Well done.
It is for this reason that I think the Beauty and the Beast: of Love and Hope needs to be rereleased: Ron Perlman did a brilliant job in recitation. I still have my tape of it.
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Wonderful! Love the big smile at the end. I've always pictured it ending with a big smile!.
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^^Nice mate!
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i recommend you work the blank verse a little more.
Very nice. The ambient light added an emotional element.
WillSkarlet 3 years ago
Thank you. I couldn't disable the LCD screen's backlight, so I used it to my advantage. :-)
jjuran 3 years ago
Expressions are also very important. They express whether the reader understands the meaning. Excelent.
jerarc 3 years ago
"Expressions are also very important. They express whether the reader understands the meaning. Excelent."
Funny you mention that. I recently realized to my chagrin that I misinterpreted the line "Yet in these thoughts, myself almost despis'ng".
I originally thought it was intended to be cynical and bitter (following a litany of complaints ending with "With what I most enjoy, contented least").
(continued)
jjuran 3 years ago
(part 2)
But in fact the line begins a new stanza, one which is not merely joyful, but euphoric. The conjunction "Yet" indicates contradiction of "these thoughts" of self-loathing; something supersedes them.
In other words (paraphrased), "Even while in this foulest of moods, I happen to think of you, and then I'm delighted."
So rather than bitter, in this line I now see the speaker poking fun at himself for being so dramatic.
So, now I understand the meaning. :-)
jjuran 3 years ago
This is a very nice--and believable--reading. The joy and the music at the end are themselves "Like to the lark at break of day arising..."
Lightexpand 4 years ago
Thank you!
I can't take full credit for the choice of music, though, since I took it from Perlman's reading of the same poem.
jjuran 4 years ago