boces is hell version 2

i wrote this song and recorded it with a band after going through a secondary school for behavior problems, called Boces. i am putting the second version of this song up for feedback. please don't make fun of it. i will post the first version after requests for it.
also sorry about my bad spelling.
please tell me what you think.
in this song i play rhythm guitar and i sing.

lyrics:

when my mother died
i was traumatized
so they sent me away when i wanted to stay
now i've got back
and that is a fact
i am doing great
and i state

look at me, look at you
most of you pass me through
and you dont give a damn
but you know, im a fan
you thing tburg's hell
but your wrong as well
you have not seen hell
it's boces

little kids run and swear at teachers without a care,
always getting picked on no matter what you do
boces is a prison
where you are not free
i finally escaped
and look at me

you may think im happy
but i was insane
if you had seen me there
you would have seen me full of pain

one they had me drug tested
because i kicked a chair
and stood on a bus
and would not let them near

i sat i a hospital for two hours
just to have them say im clean
all because two years ago
i was really mean

the put me on anti depressants
but im not depressed
but when im off the med
i am a mess

before i left i was a jerk
and i didn't do no work
now im acing phis ed.
and reakes even said

"when your mother died
i could tell you were traumatized
so they sent you away
when you wanted to stay
now your back and doing great
and i;ve seen you state:

you have not seen hell (x4)
its boces"

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[ThePartyCommunist]

Good

[Miamoonbaby]

Just amazing... I really like it. keep up the great work.