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+1 like and +1 subscriber. Great vid man.
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I think this was a pretty good video, all i see you need to do if adjust the position of some of the shots. The widescreen is a little off. In AE just press P on your footage, and then in the right numbers(the ones on the right) move that till it looks good :D
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Also a hostage taker wouldn't have left a gun right next to him. and the shell or in your case CO2 cartridge wouldn't have landed in front of him. Try working better on your angles and get more people. I will see what you have done later if i come across you guys in the future
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@BigjohnSuton It's not about you have! It's about what you can! I bet you fail... NOOB
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umm...was this in a school? how did you get fake guns into a school?
AndJusticeForAll1231 2 weeks ago
@AndJusticeForAll1231 Yes it was, and we did this on a weekend, for one of our actors' dads works at the school!
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 2 weeks ago
Great work. But I do want to point things out. You need to improve your cinematography. That was the biggest flaw I saw in this film. Second, audio. Your audio was very inconsistent. There were too much 'room noise' variations and it was hard to hear what you were trying to say many of the times. And there were other FX issues, like color grading and correcting. I suggest you watch Freddiew2's tutorials. They are REALLY useful. Otherwise, great job. Hope I didn't sound too hostile. Keep it up.
MeltedFilms 1 month ago
@MeltedFilms Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism, didn't sound hostile. This is the stuff that will help me get better!
ExecuteExpensiveStuf 1 month ago