Alert icon
We're changing our privacy policy. This stuff matters.  Learn more  Dismiss

swordfight in september

Loading...

Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon
Upgrade to the latest Flash Player for improved playback performance. Upgrade now or more info.
50 views
Loading...
Alert icon
Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon

Uploaded by on Sep 7, 2011

a bad sword fight film, for the primary purpose of learning to use my camera.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

License:

Standard YouTube License

  • likes, 0 dislikes

Link to this comment:

Share to:

Uploader Comments (jamesbarros)

  • Because of this, I think the cut from the close nod to the wide walk away is the worst cut in the film, precisely because it's not different enough, so it just feels jarring.

  • What surprised me the most was the intro scene however. I had intended to film them walking up to each other, cut in close for the nod, and then go wide for the walk away and turn. When I did that, it looked choppy and ugly I need to study the art of the cut. I think the transitions need to be from one scene to something which is clearly and visually something else.

  • I’d filmed what I wanted for tyler drawing his sword, but we then switched sides and I forgot to refilm it. That part should have been better. could have been, the issue was my script supervisor slacking.

    The kill scene could have been a lot better.

see all

All Comments (4)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • lolol

    

Loading...
Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more