Mon Amour / ; Part 1/5

Ahh. a short story (:
I was inspired by a oneshot called 'Amorella' by TheDefinitionOfWeird
It was truly amazing, so here i am, with all of my non-existant writing expertise.
Be brutally honest with me.

1) What did you like?
2) What did you hate?
3) What did you think?
4) and thoughts? Comments?

The story line is very very basic.
William lived a very extravagent life. Everything was planned, nothing was out of order. His day followed a schedule which if anyone dared to change, they would be fired from whatever position they held at Force Inc. He met Mallory at a young age, they seemed like the perfect couple too, so when his father was diagnosed with cancer, William devoted his time to making his reason for life happy. Mr. Force had always shown a great liking to Mallory, so William proposed. Two weeks after the annouced engagement, his father passed away. Taking all of the money he had been left with, Mallory & William moved to Paris and started a business. One night, William decided to take his fiancee to a ballet. Little did he know, there he would met the most intoxicating, proper, yet wild and crazy woman ever. And soon, he would fall in love.

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ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE RIGHTFUL OWNER.

Song; Hope- who am i to say
Pictures; Various Sites
Program; Song Vegas 7.0

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• niley
• nelena
• love
• heartbreak
• nick
• jonas
• kevin
• joe
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• nicholas
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• shane
• Jason
• Lucas
• sonny
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[mandawander]

William is Nick, Selena is Mallory? and Demi is the most intoxicating, proper, yet wild and crazy woman ever. (:

[caitlinjessicax3]

I've never thought of making a Nemi...hmm, I think I'm gonna start writing one! :P

[xxstrawberycakexx]

Hey whats the song you used?

[allieverwantedxo]

this is amazing.

you have to continue! <3

[Stacee2388]

love it please hurry

[GoodiiTooShoes]

please oh please :) NEMI! there's barely any nemi series :'(

[XxTwilightxDancerxX]

Oh my gosh!

This is amazing, now, I'm gonna be constantly thinking about it. =)

I'm not much of a William and Mallory fan.. But oh well. =)

[xoloveforever11]

no its nick, selena, and miley not demi. check in the tags. it says nelena and niley. not nemi.

[NickJonasGurl99]

1:the fact that everything was detailed,but not boring :D

2:that it ended :(

3;i loved it.

4:i wonder who the mysterious one is ;)