1.2 - Original Song

An original song recorded january 2nd

wake like one
everyones waiting
everyones doing
cant catch it all alone

Pirates in a free land
Cruising melodies
getting punched in
its all new
done again

This someone has many meanings
ill say may
Im hitting my mark
what the hell feels good
hush dont say a word

stupid lines make it right
right on time feel good
just to hit your mark
look into your eyes
just remember from
inside the waiting room

flow like water
flow like water
flow like water

come back
never wait
go on
keep going
all my favorite lines
all my friends
that drop like dimes
go on and lose your mind
touch something
feel someone
I said lonely
but still you can not be alone
better take it slow
better be good
good things
good people
come to those who do
wake up
every things going
everyones doing
better jump off or
jump in

flow like water
flow like water

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[TheHarshCritique]

pretty good. Favorited

[StrangeOctoberDay]

Thank you very much for listening and the comment

[Firefred1]

great, as always :)

[StrangeOctoberDay]

:) :)

[KabaHiroshi]

Your voice is attractive and passionate.

I like your song like a blues.

I'm lucky, because I listened to your song first today.

[449JaneDrive]

nice, i know a good song when i hear one, no matter what genre it is. and this is much better than most of the crap thats out there today.

[kemo1993to1997]

nice song dude you should remake the one by pink floyd . wishing you were here sounds like you could make it sound like new haha great job brotha :)!!

[toriamosX]

Your original songs are really great songs levi and dave. They are better than most of the music out there. I really enjoy listening to them and figuring out the meanings of them..

5***** stars.