The Story Of My Life (WITH LYRICS ) Cutler Talent 2010 Unsigned Songwriter

I am a songwriter(NOT a singer/performer).I have written a few songs and I am putting them on here to try and get an idea of what people think of my songwriting.Its something I love doing and would be very gratefull for any comments people leave(good or bad),so thankyou for taking the time to read this and I hope you like the music....Thanks!!!!

Category:

Music

Tags:

• pop
• music
• dance
• cutler
• talent
• 2010
• unsigned
• songwriter
• xfactor
• bgt
• britians
• got

[webbspider]

Hi is it you singing... nice excelent job.. maby ad some pics.. or vid taken outside in or outside a factory.. for the rest i like it 5*

[MrHatman35]

@webbspider @webbspider yes it is me singing,thanks for the comment.Someone called mrfozbee has actually made a really good video to this track,if you wanted to take a look type in 'THE STORY OF MY LIFE CUTLER TALENT 2010" and you should see a cartoon guy in a yellow t-shirt..that the one! 

[JESSJUSTJESS]

Excellent! I like the soft rhyme theme and the progression of comparative life goals.

"..a car and day job but that isn't life to me." You might want to consider changing it from "To me>>For Me" A slight alteration. To me indicates negative conclusion (Some people do find that life fulfilling) while For Me conveys a different path after consideration. Great tempo and spoken portion place in the exact right bridge. Great song message. Well done. Very good, as is!

[MrHatman35]

@JESSJUSTJESS Thanks for your comment Jess,I see what you mean about the " To Me " part,I didnt intend it like that when the song was written and hope that particular line doesnt offend anyone,but Thanks for pointing that out to me,and thankyou again for taking the time to listen and leave your comment,much appreciated!

[ARMAGEDDONlsCOMING]

This is Good! Thought it was a published song that I never heard before

it sounds finished! :))

[GreatestOnlineVideos]

very original, thanks for posting!

[clynnehouse]

I love the start of page 2 really good start. The music needs help

[sorekneck]

Love this song mate! you are a great songwriter! Your quite a good singer too!! LOL Keep going buddy ..... :)

[bunchie1966]

I like your melodies, though I'm not a big fan of synth sounds.

[webbspider]

@MrHatman35 Yes.. excellent excactly how i would love to see it.. thie guy did a great job.. i favorite the song.. thank you very much for showing me.. and it is a great song to.. i will send it to my friends..

World wide warm webbspider loves

[LakhotaAkicita]

hey i actually like your music :)

[Optos23]

you are very talented. Nice song