California-Original Song

This is a new song I wrote yesterday. It's the first one I've written in probably five year, so I'm pretty pleased with it. I can't come up with a title though
Any ideas?

Update: I named it California

Hope you enjoy, Sarai

Lyrics:

If there's a concrete tower
I only want to bleed
You've made a first impression
It taught me how to see
And there's no going back to the way it used to be
I shouldn't be nostalgic
I should look before I leap

Chorus:
Every day I'm gonna see you again
And I hope you realize these tears don't mean anything
Watch me fly away, he'll steal me the moon
I could start again, but this feels so soon
(2nd time: I could start again, but I still see you)

I'd like to say I'm sorry
And that I'd love to talk
But I guess I'd be lying
Cause I think it's your fault
If you knew anything at all
I didn't mean to fall
I'd take back all I said and did
If I could

Chorus with 2nd alternative lyric

And looking in your eyes, it's easy to realize
I made the biggest mistake in thinking I'd be different

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• California

[Nickidemic]

Hey Sarai, it's Nicknar :) Nice work! What are the lyrics though, could you type them up for us to read? ;)

[saraielora1993]

@Nickidemic haha i put the lyrics up!



[Nickidemic]

@saraielora1993 thanks haha. Is this written for anyone in particular?

[saraielora1993]

@Nickidemic yes, in fact it is ha.. haha

[Nickidemic]

@saraielora1993 haha, would you mind sharing who...? ;)

[saraielora1993]

@Nickidemic Uh yeah I would mind haha. Not particularly wanting to put his name on the internet really.... I'm kind of friends with him, and I feel like things probably wouldn't go too well if I did that

[Mr3Chords]

invest in some recording equipment and forget about all the rest

[kamoteinthehouse]

The song is pretty good :)) i like it :) and you're pretty cute :)) keep it going :)

[BooUrScared]

Ur pretty, Ur talented.

i love you ;D.