I FORGIVE YOU....A Gangster's Redemption

I forgive youMy first MovieStorm film short.

A gangster boss starts to have regrets about the life hes led and the people hes killed, but only after he finds out the father of the son he killed was a legendary former hitman and now hes coming out of retirement for one last killhim.

He calls in a local priest to give his confession to and be forgiven. He also has his men on lookout for this hitman and stop him before he can get to him.

Is this his last day to live?

Spoiler.Dont read below this until after watching.

This is considered my commentary of the story. Some people tell me they didnt understand the storyline in some of my previous movies.

This gangster has killed a lot of people, but it so happens he kills a legendary former hitmans son. Hes currently in the witness protection program living as a priest. Since hes been a priest for a while, his appearance has changed over the years and no one either recognizes him nor remembers him.

The priest uses a delivery boy with a bag of money as a decoy to distract the lookouts. He figures they will think the boy wants to get inside to kill their boss with the excuse of making a payment for someone. Their greed for the money distracts them that the priest has already made his way in.

The face morph of the priest signifies him reverting back to his old lifestyle in order to make the kill.

I hope you liked the blood, muzzleflashes, and explosion FX. But alsoI hope you noticed the decapitated arm flying at the screen during the explosion and also the shell casing flying out of the gun as the gangster is shot

This is my first MoviesStorm film production. Ive decided to alternate between iClone and MovieStorm because I like them both and think they are great products.

If you have any questions on my effects and such, feel free to ask me.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Moviestorm
• iClone
• machinima
• animation
• horror
• crime
• religeon
• witness protection
• CSI
• gangster
• gang

[jshar79]

how did u put the blood in it?

[mollyscreationz]

I must say, that was an excellent first film. Your special effects were great... especially the last bit where the priest shot his head - brilliant timing with effects and sounds... great camera shots, great story... really enjoyable...

[C0rpsezilla]

It's strange how everyone has that same country accent. I usually dont think of mobsters with that type of voice. But it was good. Btw, I saw the ende coming. =D

[Harb40]

Very good for a first MS attempt. With that said, a few things I noticed:

1) The bag seemed undamaged after the explosion. Wish I had a bag that durable.

2) The voices didn't seem to fit the characters. I know voices come in all styles ands tones but the gangsters voice seemed off compared to his looks. ANd the guys outside, the voices were a bit loud for the camera distance.

Other than that, good job. Nice way to end it also. Although I kind of suspected it was him.

[KVPictures]

haha very nicely done, excellent work for your first release, nice use of fx and cool story. Look forward to seeing more from you.