Avibot original song

This song was originally written by Avibot, and upon request I've recorded it :D I have changed around some of the lyrics and the tune, but I hope you guys enjoy it. Please feel free to critosize (sp?) but please, make it appropriate. I don't need people going "you suck!" on my page and "You're a disgrace to music!" Nobody wants to hear it }=] lol. Please, creative critosicism (i keep thinking I spelt that wrong)

If you'd like the revised lyrics, here they are:

Will you notice, will you stay
Co'z I'm nobody anyway
You decide and it's ok
I can bear all the pain
Like Ive done
So many times before

-ch-
With your eyes and your smile too
Will you look my way so at least
I can dream of you
Would you kiss me
Or would you walk away
Baby just tell me
I promise Ill be ok
-/ch-

Tell me what you can see
Or Will you even look or talk to me
Can you look in my eyes
And know that Im still all alone in misery
Could you love, would you love, will you love
When you love a loser like me

-ch-

I promise Ill be ok
At least when you see me every day
In the morning light
In the day time
Ill smile with bright hazel eyes
When I look at you
But dont look back
As you pass by me on your way
Coz I dont think I could hide it
Hide the heart ache

If you notice, will you stay
I dont think so
Co'z I'm nobody anyway
Youve decided and it's ok
I think I can bear the pain
Like Ive done Before
Oh So many times before

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