Big Girls Don't Cry: A Jonas Daughter Spanking Story intro

Hey guys. This is the intro for my series and it is also my first ever youtube video! Thank you so much to SimpleSexStories for the inspiration and please subscribe to her. Please tell me what you think and if i should continue.

Brooke:
- 13 years old
- adopted daughter of Kevin

Kevin:
- 21 years old
- adoptive father of Brooke

Joe:
- 20 years old
- adoptive uncle of Brooke

Nick:
- 16 years old
- adoptive uncle of Brooke


BROOKES POV
Hi, Im Brooke Johnson and I am 13 years old. Well, legally my name is Brooke Jonas. I am the adopted daughter of Kevin Jonas. Kevin adopted me when I was 11 years old. I live with him and his two brothers, Nick and Joe. Legally, they are my uncles. I hate all of this legal crap. I already have a dad. He is my dad. Legal or not, he is my one and only dad. I dont know much about him but I do know that he gave me up for adoption when I was 3 years old and that he is now in rehab, but I dont know why. Even though Kevin is my legal dad, I will never call him dad. I will also never call Joe and Nick uncle. Im not going to lie, I love them. They are nice sweet and love me, but they will never replace my real family. I never wanted to leave my friends at the orphanage, but Kevin says that it is for the better. That is the one thing that I cant stand. They think that they can come, take me from my friends and family and tell me what to do. I never wanted to get adopted so when Kevin came to get me I told him straight up in his face, You can take me from my family. You can take me from my friends. But you will never be able to tell me what to do. His reply, Well see about that. Since that day I made a vow. No matter what they do, I will never cave into them. I just hope I can last...

KEVINS POV
Hi, Im Kevin Jonas. I live with my two brothers, Joe and Nick, and my adopted daughter, Brooke.

Brooke.

She is something. There is no other way to say this. She is a brat. She can be nice and sweet, and when she is you cant help yourself but want to be around her. But when she isnt, well, it isnt pretty. My brothers and I, we try to keep her in her place. How? the old fashioned way. We spank her. I dont know what is running through her mind. She has this really obnoxious attitude. And believe me, she doesnt hold it back. But when we spank her it is like this little innocent 5 year old comes out of her. She kicks, screams and cries like it is nobodys business. She says that she is sorry and begs us to stop but then when we do finish, the attitude comes back all over again like nothing happened. She defiantly doesnt like getting spanked; I just dont know what is up with her. Its like she is trying to prove something...

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[KawaiiVanilla]

hm. i felt awkward reading this. but i try to keep an open mind to other people's work.

im sure you have plenty of tallent for this kind of thing, but it needs more storyline. all that happens is Brooke does something and gets spanked for it.

i understand its a "spanking story" whatever that is really, but you need a bit more to put into this. but besides all that, good job, keep writing, it's fun isn't it. :)

[krazekikz]

yeah...i was thinking that i needed to add a plot to it.

thanks for the feedback : )

most people are scared to tell people the truth about their stories.

[uniqueXminds]

Okay so after reading through about 15 parts, I have to say this is ridiculous. I normally LIKE this kind of thing BUT

1 Kevin is only 8 years older than Brooke, old enough to be her BROTHER, and adoption can't occur in the U.S and MOST other countries unless the adoptive parent is at least 15 years older than the child in question.

Not only that but he lets his brother spank her, knows she has eating disorders, and they all beat her rather than help her adjust. Wtf.

[Tvoss241]

@uniqueXminds : Who said someone's fantasy or imaginative undertakings had to be 100% logical or stoic? Perhaps the semi-awkward nature of the exchange is there to add credence to the story. WTF indeed. Is it somewhat course? Admittedly so by the author... it's also the author's first submission. Never forget: 'What one man gathers, another man spills'

[jafelton]

red:click my channel

[007TruthSeeker]

You could do some powerful things with this premise, krazekihz, but consider adjusting a few details.

The adopting "father" needs to be older to be not only legal but realistic.

The spanking setting and set can evolve from simple, childish behavior modification to something much more interesting, given its connotations and ability to generate strong reactions, both positive as well as negative.

Are you aware of Shadow Lane? The Penny Birch Society? Janus? These are just a few.

[0miss0heather0]

@Manson4Life666 uh sorry to tell you, but ever heard of FICTION!?!?!??!!?!?! that means it is NOT real!!!! I swear, some people can be so stupid....

[indybaby2007]

omg it sounds so good continue

[KawaiiVanilla]

your welcome. =)

good luck, i'll keep reading.

[jojotraps]

yes

[Manson4Life666]

ok first of all u r not the jonas adopted daughter and if u r ur stepdads r fucking homos