Hey guys... sorry I haven't posted in awhile... I was waiting for the 10 comments I tried for in the last chapter... enjoy.
("Wow. It is amazing that when you take the time to just sit and think about the random things that will pop into your head." He finally came back to reality as he stood out on the porch leaning over the wood railing, the cool autumn breeze fiddling with his hair. He pulls his nice leather jacket tighter around his body to keep the cold air from getting in. He looks up into the sky and looks at the stars, the moon like a huge lantern in the sky, and he thinks, "wow. I must be really small". Compared to everything that could be out there, he felt that he is nothing but a microscopic dot. Even though everyone treats him like he's something special, he thinks he's really not that great. Some crazy things have happened in the amount of time he has been around but it's not like other people haven't gone through crazier times. His deep thinking is interrupted by a fast object flying past him and smacks into the window. He hears a slight thud on the floor of the front deck and he turns around. A tiny yellow and black bird is flopping around so he goes over to it, squats down, and gently picks it up.) Hey you. You should be in your safe little nest sleeping. (he says quietly. The little bird stands back onto its two tiny feet and rests there for awhile. He sits and pets it gently and talks to it as soothingly as possible. It eventually stands on his hand and looks ready to go. He stands up and walks back over to the railing and puts his hand out.) Go on little bird. You can go now. (Right as he says that the bird spreads its wings and flies away. He watches as it gets itself into the air and disappears. He smiles to himself and looks down at his phone. 6:30. He is guessing that he should probably go in now but he really doesn't want to. He is enjoying being alone and sitting in the silence. It feels nice to just get away from everything. He closes his eyes and embraces the feel of the crisp air hitting his warm cheeks. He begins to get lost in his thoughts again. He thinks of that cold night in the snow. How he had been scared that night. How his heart had quit beating that night. How when they got him into the ambulance and out of the snow how his heart fought once more. How he struggled so much that night. How he died that night.)
Flashback
(He can hear his mom and dad's voices as well as Joe's and Kevin's. They all sound so worried and that scares him even more. He hears his name mentioned quite a bit but he can't see them. He doesn't like wherever he is. It is dark and cold, almost as if he is in a slightly heated pool. He tries to move but he can't, this force holding him down is too strong. The only thing that is keeping him somewhat calm are their voices. He knows he is safe when they are here. But wait! Their words are becoming more and more unclear. Why are they becoming unclear!? He starts worrying, panicking! The voices get more quiet as he feels himself being pushed below the surface. He feels like he is drowning and the water is getting cold. Too cold. He tries so hard to scream out but his body won't do anything he tells it to do. He can't breathe! He is suffocating! It is getting harder and harder to fight. He can't hold on much longer. He struggles for a period that seems like forever until everything starts to get warmer and then he loses all the consciousness that he ever had.)
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(He is shortly brought back by a huge electric shock bolting through his body. He hears muffled voices but he can't make them out. He tries with all his might to open his eyes. He is unsuccessful but he does manage to open them up to just a slit but everything is too blurry. He feels something rub his cheek but he slumbers into a deep sleep.)
(He hears the front door creek quietly and he hears small footsteps on the porch. A quiet voice then says his name gently.)
"Nicky?"
So there you go... so I hope you guys like it.... please, I want to know that you like it so comment and give me your opinion.
Random question: What is your school mascot?
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I love this
Really good , so nick's dead ? O:
&& My school's newww soooo . . yeah .
MiszKarizma 11 months ago
@MiszKarizma I love that you love this. lol So many questions to be answered, but don't worry, they will be. :)
jonasbrothersfantasy 11 months ago
Oh my!!! I love this chapter so much.
I think your story is excellent and I can't wait for more :)
My school doesn't have a mascot. Unless you wanna count the random giant orange wire man standing outside of the entrance. Lol :)
spannatoolkit377 11 months ago
@spannatoolkit377 Hahaha! I'm glad you like this chapter and thank you so much for continuously supporting my story. :)
jonasbrothersfantasy 11 months ago