Jarrod Yeomans - Broken Plans (Original) (C)

My first Original song called Broken Plans
This is my first attempt at songwriting - im told it sounds a bit like Leonard Cohen
Its a bit of a sad song about someone who has been hurt in the past and is starting to heal

As always:
Please rate if u like
- comments and suggestions/requests welcome :)
- no derogatory comments as they will be removed... Constructive critisism is encouraged but flaming is not

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Lyrics:
V1
Youve been gone, such a long time
But you have never been far from my mind
Want you to know, how i loved you so
want you to see, what you meant to me Before

Your smile was like the light after the dark
When you left me i damn near fell apart
It burned like fire and left me blind
You broke my heart when you left me behind

Chorus
Its amazing how quickly things can change
How different things look when there rearranged
The plans we make
Always seem to break
And we know theres noone else to blame

V2
Im so sorry things have turned out this way
Tried everything i could think of ut my heart on display
But you took what you needed threw the rest away
Left me bruised and broken filled with dismay

Took a little time to move past the pain
Felt like i was naked in the pouring rain
But now ive got the fire back into my eyes
Brought a little colour back into my life

Chorus
Its amazing how quickly things can change
How different things look when there rearranged
The plans we make
Always seem to break
And we know theres noone else to blame

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Jarrod
• Yeomans
• Acoustic
• Sandcastles
• Original
• Broken
• Inside
• Plans
• Skeltons
• Bradintampa
• Jason
• Mraz
• yt:quality=high
• Jack
• Johnson

[Bluefroger]

Really like this one, Jarrod, i could hear Jack Johnson performing, this!!

Sarah x

[arcticwolf1985]

Jack Johnson is one of my favorite artists!

thank you for such a big compliment!

[cassie0722]

Great Job for your 1st song...thats unbelievable!! I love the lyrics...phrasing needs a little work, and maybe punch up the chorus a little...needs a little varience. But, I'm NO EXPERT!! :)

[arcticwolf1985]

thanks!

this song has evolved a bit since then lol

[guitmartiman]

Not bad at all for a first attempt! Keep it up!

[arcticwolf1985]

thank you :)

[oakshroom]

very good man

keep it up!!!!

check out my new jah roots cover

[bloomingpower]

i like your originals dude

[littlebitmore2]

A belated Happy Birthday.

I am enjoying your voice and song. Very clear

and full of feeling

endless starz

will also sub from my mommarox2 channel

[totalalex90]

i really love this man keep going (y)

[cdkkiss1952]

Great work..You play and sing very well..Way to go..Many people wish they could play and sing..You have achieved the dream..5 stars and a fav from me..

Craig.

[groberson2007]

I love originals...5*****s

Welcome aboard friend...