Hate is a Strong Word (A Nick Jonas Love Story) Ch. 11

I just want to start off by saying that I'm kind of upset. I'm not getting any comments from you guys! If everyone that read the story would leave a comment, then I wouldn't be saying this. Is it too much to ask that you at least say one word. Like: good, great, bad, terrible, awful, tremendous... Something! Thank you, I need feedback in order to write! :)
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Kaitlyns POV
"Come on, lets go sit down." Sydney said while we linked arms and walked away from the door. I saw Rachel Adams sitting by herself at a table. I stopped walking. Sydney kept going and then jerked back towards me. "Why did you stop?"
I slipped my arm out of Sydneys grasp and sat down at the table that Rachel was at. "Hey Rachel, why are you sitting here by yourself?"
Rachel rolled her eyes and looked at her plate. "My so-called date is in the bathroom." She sounded angry.
"Why are you so mad?"
"He wont even dance with me." She looked up at me. "Were at a DANCE, you know!?"
That made me let out a little chuckle. "Yeah, well at least you have a date." I said while raising my eyebrows. She laughed a little.
"Hey Kait lets go, Tonys at the table already." Sydney said, she sounded excited.
"Okay." I got up from the table and started to walk away but looked back at Rachel. "Im sorry. But try to have fun, okay?"
Sydney and I walked away from Rachel to our table. When we got there Syd practically jumped on Tony and hugged him. Then he reached over and gave me a hug. "So who were you guys talking to?" He asked curiously.
"Rachel Adams." I spoke up. "She was upset with her date." I said while leaning back in my chair.
"Whos her date?" Tony asked, picking up a roll from the table.
I was surprised, only because I couldnt believe I was so stupid that I didnt even ask her who her date was. "I dont know, I forgot to ask. But I guess well find out."
He smiled and looked at Sydney. "Well whoever her date is, hes not as good as my date." Oh boy, here we go.
Sydney batted her eyelashes and smiled. "Aww, youre so sweet." I picked up a roll from the table and ignored the rest of their conversation. I thought it would probably just gross me out anyway. I started to pick the roll to pieces, bored to death.

I was sitting at my table by myself now. Sydney and Tony were sitting by me flirting for an hour, totally ignoring me, but I didnt really mind. The flirting was really awkward though. But finally they got up to dance. I didnt even know the other people that were at my table, but they werent sitting there. The song that was playing stopped and some people sat down and some continued dancing to the next song. I felt a finger tap my shoulder and I turned around to a curly brown-headed boy, with a cheesy smile on his face. Nicholas Jonas.
"Hey" I said in a very mellow voice while looking up at him.
He stuck out his hand. "Dance with me." Whoa.
I was really taken back by that. I looked at his hand and then looked up at his face. He raised his eyebrows as if he were saying, come on you know you want to. "Oh, no. No, no, no. I dont think so." I said nervously while shaking my head.
He kept his hand there. "Oh come on, you cant hate me that much." He said while smiling.
"I dont HATE you." I said while rolling my eyes.
He dropped his hand to his side. "Oh, my mistake, I thought you did."
I looked away from him and sighed. "Well, I dont"
He stuck his hand out again and I looked back at him. "Well then you wont mind dancing with me." He smiled. I smiled and shook my head.
"Come on, dont make me stand here like an idiot forever." He begged.
"Okay, fine. One song!" I placed my hand in his and he led me to the dance floor.

Category:

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• Word
• Nick
• Jonas
• Love
• Story
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[NickJisPonage]

I'm sorry! I haven't been able to comment for like 2 days!! I will now though! This chapter was amazing!

[JonasGomezSwift284]

Haha it's okay, I didn't mean to threaten you. :/ sorry. Thank you for commenting though, I appreciate it.

[cinhere]

this is really good!!

[thetami424]

@wweandjbcollide lol me to

[Superstarlexie07]

aww, amazin/

[NickJisPonage]

Haha, well just so you know, I didn't feel threatened! I just always feel bad when I can't comment for any reason! For being too busy, for my iPod or computer being stupid and not letting me comment, anything! It makes me feel bad and I always appologize for it!

[ally5775]

Aww... adorable?!?

haha atleast its 'One Song' haha

Lovedit!

[jamiejay8795]

i really liked this chp

post soon

[wweandjbcollide]

I wonder why Nick would dance with Kaitlyen but not his date?