Fallen Soldier- Oneshot Part three {Best Niley writer round one}

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Uploaded by on Nov 25, 2009

emotion:sorrow, deep despare, true love, brokeness

ok final part let me know what you think:)

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Nick's POV
The flight was landing and I was jumping in my seat. I couldn't wait to have them in my arms. To kiss the woman I love deeply. Have as many romantic dinners as possible. Go outside and play with my kids. Go to rollerworld, Main event, and anything else they wanted. I was glad to serve my country but there were high costs to that decision. And everytime I left I felt that I lost them. I needed to know that they were still mine. The plain touched the ground finally. I closed my eyes and imagined holding her. Miley. My beautiful love. That kiss was so close I could taste it. I needed to get home. I grabbed my carry-on bag and hurried off the plain. I quickly made my way to the terminal and searched for my bag. I found it and grabbed it . I got out of there quickly and found a cab. It seemed like it took forever to get home. Maybe because I wanted to be there at the exact minute. I finally got there but it was not what I was expecting. I saw yellow tape surrounding my home saying "Do not cross. Crime scene." I payed the driver and hopped out quickly. It was a crazy place. There were tons of cops going everywhere. Somewhere in the rush I picked up a few words. "Family is dead", "No father", "Need to find him", "three children, two boys,one girl". My mouth went dry. I moved mechanically to what seemed to be the head officer. Somehow I found my words and spoke " This is my house. where is my family?" I panicked when I saw his eyes sadden with a look of pity and sorryful. "Sir, I am so sorry to say this but your family has been murdered." Everything around me became a blur. I colapsed to my knees and sobbed. "No no!" I repeated. Thats all I could say. As a soldier I always questioned if I would come home but never this. never. I rocked back and fourth. I sobbed. My heart was broken. I could no longer live. nobody was looking I got up and sneaked into my house. I walked up the stairs to me and Miley's room. I turned the corner and got the breath knocked out of me. There they were. My family. Every single one of them. Miley so pale and white with a protective arm around all of our children. Noah who looked frigtnened and tried to get comfort in her brothers arms. Braison being the good brother he was looked like he got the most beating trying to protect his siblings and his mother. And last but not least Franky, he looked so scared. I broke down crying. Who could do such a thing?? I hated him with all of my being. My heart was shattered. I screamed. A scream only a broken man can scream. A scream of a fallen soldier. I went over to the closet and pulled down a box. I opened the lid and lifted the gun from it. I did not take another thought. My family was no longer in this world and where they aren't I could not be. I was going to go to our true home now. My purpose on this earth was no more. So I brought the gun to my head thinking about the place I was fixing to be in. Where I would see my Heavenly Father. And my family. And I pulled the trigger. and then it all went dark...

The end.
I hope you enjoyed it as much as I loved writing this.
It all came from the heart. This is my favirite thing I have done. so hope you like it comment and tell me.
God bless
-Syd

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  • @KissAndTellStudio im sorry but i told you no promises lol and if you wanted something happy then why dont we just dance is better

  • omg. that was amazingggg

  • Ah--mazing, but sad that they all died. : *(

    ur an awesome writer. : )

    u r gong on my list on my channel description. : )

  • omg i loved it, it made me cry!

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