Original song - Castles

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Had writers block arrrgh! Managed to get my creatives juice flowing again but I've a bit of a cold so sorry if I sound a bit bunged up..........hope you enjoy it though xx
Lyrics as requested

They danced to crickets as they sing
And wrapped the Sun around their fingers
Felt the wind rushing through their hair
Now the days are wasted plenty
Innocence has grown and many
Foolish kings and princesses so fair
Wished for Riches always shine
Their flowered hair and Golden Crowns And Castles built on sands of time
They wait for life to knock it down
They laid down their Daisy chains and grew up
And took off their robes and crowns and wasted imagination
Couldn't they just go back, just go back to times where
Shadowy jesters walked in their footsteps
Now it's a lonely path for them to roam this land
Now there's no one building castles in the sand
Skipping hand in hand a plenty
Shapefull clouds and trees for Gentry
Nothing more in their young life will do
Now the memories of young days
Golden Thrones and wishful gazes
Are but distant from the life they knew
Castles in the sand they start to tumble
Crowns and all
Riches shining bright they start to crumble
Innocence falls
Laid down their Daisy chains and grew up
And took off their crowns and robes and wasted imagination
Couldn't they just go back, just go back to times where
Shadowy jesters walked in their footsteps
Now it's a lonely path for them to roam this land
Now there's no one building castles in the sand
They laid down their Daisy chains and grew up
And took off their crowns and robes and wasted imagination
Couldn't they just go back, just go back to times where
Shadowy jesters walked in their footsteps
Now it's a lonely path for them to roam this land
Now there's no one building castles in their sand
Copywritten 13/02/11

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• Original
• Songwriting
• Innocence
• Upbeat
• Piano
• Music

[MrECLECTICIAN]

Some how i missed this one.. This is really really really nice!! ...I love the comment below where someone said "who sings this" and you said (of course)" I do, It's original"...In a way this innocent comment is really nice if you know what I mean.

[TheThreeJays79]

@MrECLECTICIAN haha. Thanks Jeff. It's one of my favourite's actually. I know what you mean. It's nice to know that someone might have thought a proper singer/songwriter wrote it......but no! it was little ol me instead!!! :o)

[MrECLECTICIAN]

@TheThreeJays79 DON'T WORRY, You are a singer songwriter...the evidence is overwhelming!

[TheThreeJays79]

@MrECLECTICIAN Thank you :o) xx

[ronb15]

sounds awesome.. if this is you with a cold god bless us all! haha. brilliant !

[TheThreeJays79]

@ronb15 Haha. Thank you xx

[Lamprospoeta]

Wonderful song !!! Like it !!!

[violeirosurbanos]

Wonderful song and beautiful voice: a full performance!

5 *****

[wild0goose]

great song

[freddiecarthorse76]

I love this!

[freddiecarthorse76]

I love this!

[bedsitsongbird33]

like this very much cool cool song