Very good camera work overall, but you could have sped up the pace of the film. I think the song may have hindered your ability to keep the movie flowing and moving forward. It would have worked better without words and just a simple bit of melody.
The film would have been much stronger without any dialog. You were doing a great job of "showing". You didn't need to say anything.
great job with the focus.
pudgyproductions 2 years ago
This is the first video I have seen on YOUTUBE that deserves to be featured... and I have watched over 7000 videos.
skateranddancer 3 years ago
Beautiful... =)
skateranddancer 3 years ago
Great camera work, beautiful message in story, keep producing quality videos.
ghwdzh 4 years ago
Very good camera work overall, but you could have sped up the pace of the film. I think the song may have hindered your ability to keep the movie flowing and moving forward. It would have worked better without words and just a simple bit of melody.
The film would have been much stronger without any dialog. You were doing a great job of "showing". You didn't need to say anything.
I like the cut back in time at the end. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
of all the vids in this contest we think yours had the best storyline and used creative camera video shots. Esp. the Depth of Field!!
goschool2008 4 years ago 2
very nice. beautiful job filming
ridgefilmmaker 4 years ago
I love your use of focus! I love the song, too. The end gave me goosebumps....good luck!
wilkinson4925 4 years ago 2
Great work.
stephennasby 4 years ago
Awesome!
fam3c 4 years ago