"Raise The Bar" Cypher Entry | Jay Renz

Jay Renz enters the "Raise The Bar" cypher & calls out two artists: Nikko Dator (http://www.youtube.com/LoVisibility) & fellow Version 2 member AJM (http://www.youtube.com/officialAJM)

Produced by R Productions:
(http://www.youtube.com/LongBeachProductions)

Soul, you're the fuckin' man for doing some legit filming. Edited by myself.
Cameos by Soul & Martino.. and random old man & woman.

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CHECK OUT THESE LINKS:

http://www.visualsugar.com
http://www.twitter.com/vsMARTINO
http://www.youtube.com/SoulakaJon
http://www.twitter.com/SoulakaJon

CALLED OUT ARTISTS LINKS:

http://www.youtube.com/LoVisibility
http://www.youtube.com/officialAJM

http://www.twitter.com/NikkoDator
http://www.twitter.com/therealAJM

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LYRICS:

You get CORRECTED like a TYPO.
I like my bass FAT, CHUBBY CHASER, no LIPO.
I heard your bitch walk like she balancin' on tight ropes.
Your flow so shaky, like your ridin' on a bike slow.

Yup, yup, I tell 'em like it is doe.
And when I take SHOTS, I make sure that I AIM LOW.
RAISE THE BAR, that's what I came for.
I got your girls NIPPLES HARD, like the day became COLD.

Yo, your kinda actin' like the bougie type.
I got you SHOOK, MICHAEL J. FOX movie night. (What?)
I swear my team is such a nuisance.
North York livin' but Toronto's where we do it.

Version 2, search and you gon' find us.
Haters talk smack, but then they end up tryna bite us.
I stay BOSS, here's your muhfuckin' WRITE-UP.
I leave these DICKS feelin' like a group of LOOSE VAGINAS, gone.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Jay Renz
• Version 2
• R Productions
• Raise The Bar Cypher
• AJM
• Nikko Dator
• LoVis
• 2011

[KseyvcikN]

you live in north york?

where at

[JAYRENZmusic]

@KseyvcikN York Village.

[Happii4rmphk]

hey man you mind if ii call you out

[JAYRENZmusic]

@Happii4rmphk Why would you do that? I just did the cypher.

[JAYRENZmusic]

Thanks so much guys!

[ProdiJayMusic]

Shwag. This was dope!

-ProdiJay

[JAYRENZmusic]

@ProdiJayMusic Thanks brudduh!!

[ernie23ful]

killed it man gave you a like peep mine out

[primetime0144]

Good stuff bro I entered ur contest. Didn't know u lived in TO.. im in scarb.. I did a track for this cypher too.. but yah the North York line caught me off guard hah

[GoGoGadgetPinkPacket]

Good stuff man! killed it dude, definitely got my sub. I'll be checkin back for more stuff. Might try and get into your press play contest hopefully.

[TotalKaosE]

Don't too bad. The only thing I really noticed that you should work on are the metaphors, or the word choices for them. They weren't bad at all, they just seemed kind of basic, and dated. Either way, this isn't bad. Just keep working and I can see you doing a lot better.

Also work on your emphasis/emotion a bit more. That'd help.

If you get a chance check out my entry. Any feedback/critiques/criticism would be awesome, I'd really appreciate it. Peace!

[Happii4rmphk]

@JAYRENZmusic

i guess a top person like yu can only do one take lol' but okay its kewl