Writing better scene description

Great video, thanks a lot John!

I hope he posts more, three to date.

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Great stuff John!

I would love to see you do a similar screencast with a sports scene, i.e. football game. It is difficult to handle all the crosscuts, action and sparse dialogue, not to mention SOUNDS and punctuation techniques to convey the drama. thx again!

This is truly greatness. Thanks for sharing!

Great video, it will really help me when I go over my ruff drafts. I subscribed.

Thanks for doing this! Great idea!

What a great idea, John. Thanks for this.

this. is. awesome.

Thanks John. Keep them coming if you have the time.