「甘唄ヴァレンティノ」poem「UTAUオリジナル」

I planned to make an original to Valentino, and I ended up like this. My first published original song. As occasional, I tried to write Japanese lyrics too.
If I need correction, just say it. My Japanese needs cleanup...-.-
I did this with LMMS, Audacity for the mixing, and UTAU for adding the vocals.
So, I give this original as a Valentines' Day present.
Lame lyrics is lame, as I'm not fluent in Japanse.
Lyrics:
tori no tobareru no youni
atashi no uta ga kuru
METAFO no naka de kono kotoba
kimi wo aishiteru
kono kotoba kono omoi
atashi ga afureru yo
kono omoi ga iwareru suru
koi no uta wo utatte
English:
Like a bird that flies, my song will come.
These words are Inside a metaphor: I love you.
These words, these feelings
I'm overflowing with it
As these feelings start to give a voice
They'll sing the song of love

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Music

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• 甘唄ヴァレンティノ
• UTAU
• original