ANYONE THERE? (shortfilm)

ANYONE THERE?
shortfilm 2009

starring SANDRA AHRABIAN & TAI JASON

Lenght: 10min
shot on Panasonic HVX200 with P+S mini35

official selection
FANTASY FILMFEST (germany)
FANTASTISK Filmfest (sweden)
SCREAMFEST LA
FRIGHT FEST UK
PUCHON IFF (southkorea)

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• shortfilm
• anyone there
• horror
• thriller
• sandra ahrabian
• tai jason
• TAI

[socialprojectss]

Parts of it were nicely done, but definitely there needs to be a couple of changes

1.) Shorten the intro

2.) The ending was retarded. I'm sorry, but it was.

3.) Completely conceal the villain (no shorts), let the viewer use imagination

4.) The film doesn't have enough lighting

5.) When she's dancing and stops, there's no point to it. Either let the music play the whole time or completely drop it

6.)The ending is retarded.

7)The line (anyone there?) is cliche

8) The ending is f**ing retarded

[holgerfrick]

@socialprojectss haha thanks for taking the time to watch and comment... but so sorry you didn't get the film... :-(

- all cliches and scenes are like that on purpose

- the ending is amazing!

- the intro has to be that long and has a reason to that as well but i guess you don't even wanna know

i love getting criticized if it's constructive but "the ending is f**ing retarded just doesn't do it, i'm sorry!

[klappinsounds]

Wow! Excellent film! I loved it. I was just wondering though, what type of video editing software did you use? I also make horror films but mine are no good, mostly from my video editing software (Windows movie maker). Again, great job. :)

[holgerfrick]

@klappinsounds thanks a lot for the great comment. i'm using final cut pro most of the time but i can also recommend avid or adobe premiere of course... if u wanna edit yourself get one of those programs and look for tutorials online!

[nozero1]

Bad film. I understand that a horror movie protagonist should be vulnerable and empathetic, but I don't think that really justifies the 7 minutes or so of the super model do sexy things in her underwear. The villain was an utterly generic axeman, devoid of mystery or threat. In short, there is no tension, suspense, or concern for the distracting girl. The ending was an absurd twist with no real merit, purpose or common sense. It did nothing for the story but create a bunch of plot holes. Bad.

[socialprojectss]

@holgerfrick Haha, sorry about the language, just the ending really threw me off. I still don't like it, but you took my rather mean criticism well. I still agree with everything I said, but keep making videos.

[klappinsounds]

@holgerfrick Thank you so much. :) I hope that with my directing and editing I will be half as good as you. This was just perfect. This could really hit big.

[marxvlog]

Nicely done.