Young Akane audition

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This is for Casey cause she asked me to.

Um.
Audition here, and swiftly, dead lines are coming up!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fKXODb8URmw

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• young
• june

[sk8ingbases24]

There's no time limit for the sudoku...how can you suck at it?

[KrazyCatQueen]

@sk8ingbases24 I am shitty at sudoku. Really. Shitty.

[BirdieGoBoom]

(Part 2)

Line two wasn't bad, but you could have put more surprise and concern into it since Jumpy's gift is really important for Young Akane. Something about your voice just didn't sound right here. I'm not sure if I can explain it very well, but it was almost as if you were trying to sound sexy where it wasn't appropriate. The third line was good, although you could definitely add more sadness and a couple of sobs to the line.

Thanks again for taking the time to do this extra audition!

[BirdieGoBoom]

Thanks for taking the time to do this extra audition for me!

Here's my critique:

Young Akane- Generally, you did a pretty good job. You might could do with sounding a little more childish, as you sounded just a tad too mature. Your emotions were great for the most part. I like how you tackled the narration in line one; you had just the right amount of variety in the tone of your voice to keep things interesting while still staying true to the situation.

[sk8ingbases24]

@KrazyCatQueen it's not easy for me, but it's easy to find some kind of pattern when you have all the time in the world o-o