Just a raw version of a song I came up with and recorded, as shown here, a couple of years ago. Written after I broke up with someone, and was kinda hurting still.. guess you can tell from the song. ;-)
Lyrics:
Dreamin'..
I can't escape your eyes, they haunt me in my mind
Longing..
Longing for your touch, to get me through somehow
Memories are all that get me through every day,
I still haven't closed that door,
Look in my eyes, tell me if you still feel the same,
The way you used to do before..
Runnin'..
You're running from yourself, you don't know who you are
Realize..
There's so much more in life, much more than meets the eye.
Try to understand, with every step that you take,
You're getting closer to your goal,
Don't be afraid of the decisions you make,
You'll find the answers in your soul..
chorus:
Not a day has gone by,
without you on my mind
Girl, I dream about you
all of the time..
Not a day has gone,
without wondering why,
you went on without me,
I'm still wondering why...
Screaming..
Screaming at the world, when will this nightmare end?
Wakin' up..
without you by my side, nothin' but emptiness..
I gave it all I had because our love was so pure,
I'll still be there to reassure
Still goin' strong, but tell me when to let go
Darlin' please, just let me know..
-chorus again and something that was supposed to be a solo, haha..)
-again the chorus followed by a chorus with inverted questions:
Were there days that went by, without me on your mind?
Do you dream about me? Am I there by your side?
Were there days that went by, without me on your mind?
Do you still care about me? Do you hurt deep inside?
Awel, moest ge dat nu nog eens opnieuw hebben gedaan zonder de tekst af en toe te vergeten :-), vind het echt echt heel goed!!! En dieje tekst op zo korte tijd geschreven, talent!!!
Mashke7 11 months ago
@Mashke7: Merci, Masha! :)
En het zit al langer in m'n hoofd om een hele reeks ideeën die ik heb voor liedjes, eens professioneler aan te pakken, via een kameraad die een opnamestudio heeft.. :)
stargazer555 11 months ago
MONSTER IS DA LIEDJE :)
pascaljoris 11 months ago
@pascaljoris: haha, heyla maat! :)
Hij heeft da gemerkt da ik da geupload heb hier op youtube.
't is al een paar jaar oud ze, da liedje.
En is echt maar zo een ruwe basic versie van hoe ik 't in m'n hoofd heb..
Vroeg of laat es wat maten uitnodigen voor een fatsoenlijke opname..
Keyboard, bass, alles erop en eraan.. haha en iemand die kàn zingen! ;-p
Maar merci maat! :-)
stargazer555 11 months ago
@stargazer555
misschien 1 tip, klein beetje luider zinge..... dan is het nog beter ;)
pascaljoris 11 months ago
@pascaljoris: Daarom die opname ooit eh.. :-)
Dan kan uiteindelijk alles tegoei afgemixt worden, dus komt ook de zang er beter door. ;-)
stargazer555 11 months ago