cool as man! love the way its put together. Story is quirky as, so kudos there. nice and short. lighting is probably the only thing I would pick on, editing wise, could cut the alter ego scenes a bit tighter which would bring the intensity up.. but awesome for such a small crew, shallow depth comes down to the camera, shot choice was pretty cool, love getting feedback on my films also so feel free to check them out
try to have a shallower depth of field. less frames per second similar to that of 24 used in the industry helps to immerse the viewer. also the lighting is too believable. try some post effects of lens filters to soften everything a little. the more you take away from the image, the more the viewer has to sort of imagine what's there and it makes for a much more immersive experience. this feels a little sterile.
cool as man! love the way its put together. Story is quirky as, so kudos there. nice and short. lighting is probably the only thing I would pick on, editing wise, could cut the alter ego scenes a bit tighter which would bring the intensity up.. but awesome for such a small crew, shallow depth comes down to the camera, shot choice was pretty cool, love getting feedback on my films also so feel free to check them out
residualeffect44 7 months ago
@surplusdude I agree with everything you said. Spot on.
meep316 7 months ago
just a few tips to make a film more immersive
try to have a shallower depth of field. less frames per second similar to that of 24 used in the industry helps to immerse the viewer. also the lighting is too believable. try some post effects of lens filters to soften everything a little. the more you take away from the image, the more the viewer has to sort of imagine what's there and it makes for a much more immersive experience. this feels a little sterile.
surplusdude 7 months ago