Prayer for the weekend remix/cover - feedback needed

This is a song I made, but I'm not sure if it's done or not yet. That's why I uploaded it here so I can get comments about it, to help me improve it before I "finally" release it ;)

This song is a cover or remix from the chours of the song from a swedish rock group named "The Ark" with a song called "Prayer for the weekend".
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5hmNuHS3FvU
Therefore it's temporarily named prayer 2 since it's the second release I made of it this far.

The video is just frapsed in winamp with visualization because it's so boring with a black screen :)

Download link for the song:

http://files.nicklassons.se/songs/prayer_ver_2.mp3

Oh, and please stay serious about it. If you think the song is bad, please say why it's bad and it's ok. Same if you find it good :)
Offensive/rude comments will be removed.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• FL
• fruity
• loops
• feedback
• prayer
• for
• weekend
• the
• ark
• remix
• cover

[GHAdm]

Hi!

I thought it was great just somethings;

What about the singing? :p well it's kinda hard to get it in FL, i know :D since I've tried with no success.

And also:

-Good because i like this type of music and its kinda up and down notes :)

-Bad because a bit of the same thing in the beginning, there could happen something new.

Well i really like this remix :D

--Fortsätt och gör bra låtar :D

//Greets, GHAdm

[DuckHunt4]

Thank you very much for the comment :)

I'll check over the intro to make it some different to the rest of the song. Maybe more drums in the intro. And I've been thinking of the song as well. I jave no problem of mixing, just getting someone to sing since my voice wouldn't carry :p

[GHAdm]

Hi again! :D

Good that you will add some things to the song :D

Just one question:

Since im a newbie on FL, did you wrote the whole song by your self or did you imported an midi of the song?

//Good luck - GHAdm

[DuckHunt4]

Wrote it whole from scratch. It was just some weeks ago i learned how to import things from midi :p But i stole the melody from "Prayer for the Weekend" with The Ark. Otherwise, the chords are my own.

[FromStateOfTheArk]

It's good. Just end I really understood that Oh, It's really Prayer for the weekend :D Good job!

[GHAdm]

Hi again :D

You seem to be very good in FL Studio.

Since im a newbie i could use some help so can i add you in MSN or can you add me?

Im PM:ing you my MSN so add me if you want, else just leave it ;)

//Good Job - GHAdm

[0DR0]

Well, I kinda enjoyed it, nice job! XD