Call Me Closer- Chapter 3 (Nick Jonas Love Story)

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Chapter 3

That night was the worst night of my life. The night that still haunts me, that wakes me up in the middle of the night, the one that still makes me cry. I was seven years old and my family and I were coming home from my schools choir concert. The Jonas family was supposed to come but suddenly something with Paul had come up and they were unable to make it.
As we were driving home, the weather got really bad. As in, within minutes, my father was struggling to see where he was driving. And not only that, but my parents were having a fight about something I really cant remember. I just know that I was scared my parents would split up. I guess, in the end, that was a useless worry.
My father turned to my mother to rudely respond to my mother. He only diverted his eyes for two seconds from the road that my mother screamed out.
JOHN! WHAT OUT! My father hit the break and the car when spinning around, across the road. It hit another car, spinning back to the other side. My mother was screaming over and over again.
SHAEA! SHAEA, BABY, HOLD ON TIGHT! JOHN! JOHN! OH MY GOD JOHN, NO!
My father lay there on the front seat unconscious, possibly even dead. My mother kept screaming, hoping to get control of the car. I was so scared, so scared but eventually the car came to a stop. My mothers seat belt snapped, sending her flying out through the windshield glass. The car had toppled over and I had hit my head extremely hard against the glass. The warm blood spilled onto my face. Ugh, I remember thinking to myself, I need Denise or Paul. With the last energy, with the last conscience in me I stumbled to my mothers cracked phone.

[Denises POV]

My phone began ringing. At first, I didnt want to pick it up; afraid it could distract Paul from driving through the storm. Eventually, Joe, who was half asleep in the back seat, screamed.
Ugh mom! Pick up the phone its annoying!! Kevin grumbled in agreement.
I picked it up and my heart stopped, the person on the other line was breathing heavily.
Den-Den-Denise? it was a childs voice. No, it was Shaeas voice!
Shaea, Shaea love, are you alright?
Denise, it hurts, it hurts so much. Im bleeding. Moms bleeding. Dads bleeding. Ugh, its scary. Im hurt. Den- and I heard the phone fall to the floor, and along with it a small body.

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Ughh, when I type it out, it looks like it will be waay too long and then when I copy it here, its so little!!

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  • OMG!!!

    post soon!!! i want to know what happens next!

    and thats okay that happens to me too like, when i type it on microsoft word, it seems long but when i put it on youtube its short

  • i will soon, dont worry! ahah :)

    i'm glad you like it

    i know its SOO annoying!! it seems like 'omg it wont fit of youtube' but then its SO short!!

  • that was so good!! i feel so bad for her!!

  • thank youu soo much :)

    honestly, you and your stories like an inspiration to me :)

  • Amazing!!! Post more soon!

  • thankk youu :)

    i will soon ;)

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  • I just started reading your story and I love it!! Once I finish it and move on to the sequel, i'll definetly subscribe! :)

  • OMG R U A AMAZING WRITTER!!!ive never seen a story with Denise's POV :) haha <3

  • really? aw! thanx!! ur a great writer! don't ever stop!!

  • omg i know when i type it feels SO long and then it's so short!

  • thank you SO SO much!! :)

  • oh my ....

    i feel so bad for shaea ! the poor little thing!

    i like the way you used denises pov i have never seen that done before !

    great chapter !

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