Sorry guys it's been awhile, but not to worry cause its our mid term holidays so i'm off for 2 weeks!! :D
GUY i HAVEN'T RECIEVED COMMENTS IN MY LAST 2 CHAPTERS, so I feel like no ones reading my series and i feel like I'm just gonna stop writing.....
so maybe if I can recieve like 5 comments and that would be great :D
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*Kylie's POV*
Kylie: (wide eyes and shock)
Ms. Nelly: Kylie?
Kylie: yes, huh, what, hi
I don't know why but I was pissed off......I mean sure I said that I wanted to see them and now that there here I had mixed emotions circuling around through my body......
Denise: hey baby girl (smiles)
Kylie: no, no, no! This can't be!
Paul: what's wrong?
Kylie: if I'm your daughter then why did you leave me in some people's front door, but not them? (Points at Joe, Kevin and Nick)
Denise: well, we were really less fortunate that day and we couldn't afford to take responsible with one more child
Kylie: then why did you made me in the first place?
Denise:......
Kylie: I thought so, you know what things I've been through, and I've been through a lot of things, like being abuse by all of my foster parents! And ALOMOST! Sexually abused as well (in tears)
Denise: sweetie I am so sorry! (About to hug)
Kylie: (pushed her arms away) NO! Forget it! (Walked away)
*After 10 minutes of silence*
Joe: awwwwkkkkwwaaarrrddd!!!
All of them: (looks at Joe)
Joe: sorry my bad, couldn't help it...
*End of Kylie's POV*
*Kevin's POV*
WOW that was really awkward. I saw my mum almost in tears.
Kevin: mum?, you okay?
Denise: yeah, I think so
Joe: awww mommy (hugs her)
Denise: (laughs) thanks Joey
Nick: so ummm, where do you think she went?
Ms. Nely: Probably at the park, that where she always goes when she gets upset or anything
Kevin: okay where gonna go check on her, common guys
(Joe, Kevin and Nick walk away)
*End of Kevin's POV*
*Kylie's POV*
I walked away with all tears in my eyes; I went where no one can find me, in the park. I sat on the bench and cried.
???: here, do you need a tissue (handing in the tissue)
Kylie: (looks up) thanks (gets the tissue and wipes her face with it)
???: can I sit with you?
Kylie: (smiles) sure
???: (smiles) thanks (sits next to her) I'm Andrew btw (Shakes her hand)
Kylie: (shakes his hand) Kylie
Andrew: so, what's wrong?
Kylie: Nothing, it's just I found out who my real parents are
Andrew: so, is that a bad thing or a good thing?
Kylie: Bad thing
Andrew: why?
Kylie: long story
Joe: (grabs Andrews's neck) don't you dare touch her Andrew!
Kylie: WHAT THE-! HEY! Joe let go of him, he didn't do anything!
Nick: Kylie are you okay?
Kylie: I'm fine! Let go of Andrew Joe!
Joe: (Let's go of Andrew)
Andrew: (Gasping for breath) see you later Kylie (glares at Joe)
Joe: (Glares back)
Kylie: okay Joe, what was that for?
Joe: look Kylie, you don't know Andrew okay, He's dangerous
Kylie: and how would you know that? All he did was just comfort me and hand me some tissues!
Kevin: he's trying to confuse you
Kylie: okay you know what? Just, just leave me alone (walks away)
Nick: Kylie!
Joe: okay Nick, bro you go talk to her
Kevin: yeah, you're the smart one here
Ugh! I hate them! Why did they follow me! Ugh!
Nick: Kylie, wait!
Kylie: ugh! What Nick!
Nick: look I'm sorry about Joe he's the protective guy, and Andrew is really dangerous
Kylie: how is he dangerous! He was just trying to comfort me!
Nick: he's playing with you! Look, pls. don't get mad at my mum, she just did the right thing
Kylie: pfft, leaving me outside on an orphan door isn't the right thing Nick!
Nick: I know, but you have to understand, she didn't have any money that time
Kylie: Then how come she kept all of you!
Nick: I don't know, look it's very complicated
Kylie: then tell me the whole story when you're ready, I'm out of here (walks away)
Nick: no, wait, KYLIE!, WAIT!
(Joe and Kevin was right behind him)
Joe: so?
Kevin: how'd it go?
Nick: (shakes his head) sorry bro, I tried..
(Joe and Kevin nods in understanding)
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@2014Xxstarz thank you for commenting, really appreciate it =D
jonastwilightgurls 1 year ago
Post soon pretty please :)
2014Xxstarz 1 year ago
:'( I'm not getting any comments.....
jonastwilightgurls 1 year ago