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Becoming

The Story

See this old bone building
Teeter overside
Windows framed 'round black
Anyone inside?
Faded red-tiled roof
Allows in rain and snow and sun
Winds moan through captured walls
Cracked with overrun
Unsettled on it's stand
No longer fortress strong
Now wavers in the air
Found inside this dreamlike song
A song The song This song

The Song

"Travel light my Love" they sang
"Lay it all at Sovereign's feet
Battles die Forgiveness lives
Love for everyone you meet
Time, it comes for all my friend
Let your leaves fall where they may
Colors fade, many words grow dim
Is there anymore to say?"

Epilogue

Now the ocean
Is a thousand miles below
And these heavens are filled
With fire-illumined stars
And the Son shines so bright
Watch Him guide us
Through this night
As we fly
Oh Let us fly

Written by Michael McGuane
Reliablebowmusic 2003

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Original
• Becoming
• Reliablebowmusic
• songwriter
• guitar

[Oswlek]

Still one of my favorites from you. Michael. Thanks for posting as a response.

[reliablebow]

GLad You like Justin:)

[nllleonard]

This is wonderful, Michael. What a gift you have! ~NAncy

[reliablebow]

Thanks for stopping MyFriend....:)

[dmio2]

Nice performance. Cool song... interesting to think of the energy that building take on, just to be abandoned.

[reliablebow]

Yes, quite a lifeprocess. Thanks for your kudos...

[NikonPhoto07]

Came by tonight to visit my reliablebowmusic favorite. Excellent way to end a stressful day, Goodnight my good friend and your wonderful song.

[nllleonard]

Well...that wasn't enough to say. These lyrics are golden. At least that....surely more. THis is wonderful, Michael!

[nllleonard]

Dreams, stars and flying. Of course I love this one. ;) Trying to travel light...there's the challenge.

~NAncy

[Bass734]

Fantastic flow! Well done- very magical. Thanks for sharing Justin.

[healthyaddixion]

neil is one of my favorites and this definitely has his feel. stunning lyrics. thanks for sharing justin.

btw, justin, is there anything you DON'T know about music? :p

[BradfordandLasso]

very nice feel to this!

5 *****

[freeoriginalsongs]

Definitly a Neil Young feel - Nicely done Mr. Bow

[stufish4040]

Fascinating song and visuals. 5* Thx to Oswlek for sharing :)