kiss the rain - yiruma [with my own lyrics, sung by me]

ok so, this is a video I made, of me singing some lyrics I wrote to the song 'kiss the rain', by Yiruma. I think it's a great melody and I really tried to make the lyrics to fit with them; the only way for me to show what I meant was by singing them myself, which was probably not a very good idea but anyways, haha. :)
I really hope you guys like my lyrics, please ignore the parts where I mess up the singing terribly, use your imagination and make your own video singing my lyrics; you can't be any worse than me, right?! :D
The lyrics are in the video but I'll just put them here, that's probably easier. :)

Kiss the rain
when I think of you
I just want to kiss the rain
Remember all the things
We used to say
because a memory
cannot be erased
and a memory
Is all I have of you
The day you left
Is printed in my brain
Like a raindrop
Falling like a tear
And the day you left
Is when my sun went down
So I go out
And kiss the rain (pause)

and now Im here alone
standing in the rain
remembering the times
a memory
is all I have of you
And when I think of you
I just want to kiss the rain
because Im missing you
and your presence too
We are far apart
and you broke my heart
story left untold
no one there for me to hold
I am alone
no place feels like Im home
when Im out at the street
you are all I need
(pause)
And now Im here alone
I dont know what to do
but to kiss the rain
and to think of you
Because a memory
cannot be erased
and a memory
is all I have of you

well, I really hope you guys like what I wrote, and please don't leave any offending comments about my singing skills because that's not why I put the video up here!
If you make a video, please do not hesitate to put it as a video response to mine! :)

I intend no copyright infridgement or anything like that; I do not claim to own anything but the lyrics I wrote, the melody was composed by Yiruma. This video is for entertainment purposses only!

Category:

Music

Tags:

• kiss the rain
• yiruma
• twilight
• singing
• emotions
• lyrics
• messytessy88
• messytessy
• love

[messytessy88]

thanks everybody, I really apreciate the comments!! <3

[meli596TEAGUE]

yuh sinq like yuhr movinq yuhr neck too much to qo with the beat

[Thevampiregirl4]

u just have an amazing voice and a talent in writing lyrics!!

its perfectly perfect!!

loved it!!

[Lincie]

thanks, it's really touch my heart...

[caligurl12kns]

actualy...its very amazing:))

[guilbert0730]

wow..thats great!! good voice!

[AshiStarshade]

You did a wonderful job, I was not expecting that. I agree with Larelen, your voice is very beautiful in this recording, it matches it very well.

[TotallyMisty]

wow beautiful, reminds me of when misty left pokemon

[Laralen95]

omg :) wonderful ♥_♥

your voice is really beautiful and the lyrics are great !!!