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Uploaded by on Dec 13, 2009

NOT THE BEST IVE DONE... even though i wrote this song years ago.... decided to make it a chorus cuz not all of the lyrics make any sense lolzzzz

Sorry the words seem to be too small... here are the lyrics

it wouldnt be fair
If i told you it was over
you're never here my surrounding feels so cold and
i wanna taste you but i wanna make sure tht
you really need me X2
everywhere i go i look for you
Hoping one day you will turn around and see
I have done you right to be your only girl
dreamt that i held you tight
I used to be your world



Download this beat at....
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6983589324c5fce2/

VID RESPONSE PLEASE... you have managed to write some lyrics into it

ART WORK BY

http://xx-jaded-xx.deviantart.com/
GOD BLESS YAZZZZZZ

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  • I like the idea of this, I know this is pretty old and you've learned a lot since. But with some more work on this it could've been pretty sick! So, good job on this one Joey.

    I make beats myself, if you're up for a collab or anything just send me a message.

    Keep it up!

    Best Regards,

    #CjOnTheBeat

  • @iRemixCJ thank you ^.^ many of them want me to do a remix lol sadly i havent got the time to get back to the diles ^.^

  • @joeyclaris7 files**

  • you know the way you make ur vioce sounds it annoying and ugly shouldnt use autotune

  • @spiderman35k You should listen to my latest beats then ^,^

  • hey joey... if you want i can show you how to you the auto tune properly. sounds like thre were some notes off pitch early in the song. but all around i love it! the beat is sick!!! what program do you use? fl studio, acid, logic, reason?

  • @TheWadestofferson no thanks you.. i dont use them anymore ^.^

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  • almost speechless! beautiful track!

  • Download link is bad where can I get this????

  • Luv the beat..u should let someone make that a hit track..someone like LMAO..but 4real tho

  • I LOVE IT YOU GO IN

  • no agas caso alos comentarios pesimos este beat esta genial .D

  • Hey. If it is alright to you i have a rap for this that i would love to use on my mixtape if you could give me the approval. I will give you full credit for the Hook, Chorus, and Beat. I have been searchin' and i have finally found something i like. Please let me us this. Thank You. Hit me back. ~Big D

  • Im makeing my first rap to this shit, i like it.

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