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Vert and Noir? Green and Black in french?
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@Weirdoman16 that sounds kinda like the gurren lagann plot. rofl. but it does set it up good.
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ahhhhhhh!!! Cant wait to see how the first chapter will turn out ^_^, btw..im in the process of making my own characters right now :D so ill send u a link sooner or later.....just want to see what you think...(im not as good as you though :()
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@luisi4567 Call it...Hidden A.E.O.N Village xD Just kidding, here is what I think, maybe call it ATOM, or Kray, lol
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HOLY HELL!! looking forward to it!!! ^_^!! Forever subscribing to you!! YOU ARE THE BEST!! I think the story sounds awesome!! Looking forward to reading it!! XD
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sweetness can't wait ^o^
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btw the plot looks good, and im suggesting some things.....since Iseron creates Noir and is known as the leader of the group then he and Ren should have some conflict later in the manga and soon after that Iseron could die and then Ren takes over Noir...Ren could also be in conflict with some stubborn character within Noir.... and in order to have everyone listen to him he'l have to show everyone that he can become what his brother was....
Weirdoman16 1 year ago
@Weirdoman16 great plot i will take it of course thanks for the ideas :D
luisi4567 1 year ago
what is that a kind of name for a land???
I think that name is a big fail..... sorry
konda62 1 year ago
@konda62 umm well maybe i will change it jeje xD it was a random name for the land but i will change it :D
luisi4567 1 year ago