Too Far Away (Original Song)

Here's one of my few original songs. It's probably the best one I have.. all the other ones I have are lame -_-

Oh and sorry the lighting is really bad.. I didn't realize it was so dark X_X

Lyrics:

I told myself to let it go,
To just forget it all.
I told myself I'd never know,
Because I would just fall.
I told myself you're far away,
Too far for us to see.
If only I could find a way
To find you, you'd see.

But that's okay, I never win,
I only end up thinking that...

I'd hold you in an instant
And never let you go.
I'd stay with you forever
And always let you know
That I wish for you.
But you're just too far away.

I told myself I had to choose
Between reality and dreams.
I told myself I would lose
No matter what it seems.
I told myself there's just no use
Trying to be strong.
It's all just a big excuse,
My attempt to move on.

But that's okay, I never win.
I only end up wishing that...

I'd hold you in an instant
And never let you go.
I'd stay with you forever
And always let you know
That I wish for you.
But you're just too far away.

It won't be the same,
You're too far away.
There's no one to blame,
There's nothing we can say.

I'd hold you in an instant
And never let you go.
I'd stay with you forever
And always let you know
That I wish for you.
But you're just too far...

I know I'll hold you in an instant
And never let you go.
Please stay with me forever
And always let me know
That it's really you.
But you're just too far away.
I'm just too far away.
We're just too far away.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• too
• far
• away
• anna
• pesut
• guitar
• acoustic

[torroxceles]

Excellent song. I think with increased control over your voice, you could have a very bright future in music. :)

[SHINJITSUnoRAVEN]

thanks so much!

yeah I agree that voice control is the one thing I still need a little work on.

lol, I'm gonna keep doing my best! :D

[greenpurple7]

can i download this song? lol pleassseeeee! ive fallen in love with it :)

[SHINJITSUnoRAVEN]

there's a download available on my Soundclick site.. the link is in my profile!

[ItsumoKokoroniTaiyou]

チョコっとだけ苦いカモねっ！

[ItsumoKokoroniTaiyou]

カフェオーレ飲もうよ！一緒にどうぞ！

[JasmynHailey]

I reeeeally want this song on my iPod..omfg it's amazing

[liberty6521]

love this song

[szomething]

The verse "It won't be the same / You're too far away / There's no one to blame / There's nothing we can say" is also a little strange, because the first three lines have the same pitches yet the guitar stays the same. It's similar to what I said about the rising pitch at the end of the pre-chorus -- the vocals make me expect that the guitar will change, but it stays exactly the same.

Anyway, I enjoyed this song. I hope you keep writing!

[szomething]

This song is very poppy, which I like. It feels like something's missing from the second line of your pre-chorus ("I only end up thinking that") -- your pitch rises as you hold the last note, and because you're holding it I think part of me expects your beat to speed up in response. Like the beat is saying, "This is why I'm holding this note! Pay attention!"

[BreannaMichelleWhite]

haylea told me to listen to this last night. and i love it. anna you're honestly one of the best musicians i've ever met. and you inspire me more than you know. i love you hun (:

and we need to hang out and jam to paramore and reel big fish and that crappy dont date jake band :p

haha love ya!

[zeeksex77]

its beautiful ^^ 5 star!

[LightandLight]

Wow... It's so beautiful...

Sugoi, subarashii, wonderful ♥

I love the way you are .

Please continue =)

[Auron255]

I listen this song 100 times xDDD...101 xDDDD ^^ is... is...SUGOI!!! xDDDDD