blue team episode 1
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Uploaded by distroyer3000 on May 5, 2010
A new guy is joining the blue team.
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It's not bad, but you forced way too much detail into one episode. You have to keep the viewer interested and by explaining everything all at once you make the viewer lose interest. You also had quite a few unnecessary lines. For instance, "Now I'm gonna go talk to the general, see what he wants to talk to me about." The second part is completely pointless. Other than that it was pretty good. I suggest getting an editor. You could also get a little enthusiasm from your voices.
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so what was the point of this?
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the elite names were stolen from the series Outpost: isle. yet another spartans vs elites machinima.
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I KNEW IT!
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@distroyer3000 after effects? never heard of it. and i have vegas 9
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Honest critique.
You may want to shorten your intro. It's a 6 minute video in total, with a minute and thirty seconds of intro, and a minute of credits, which means nearly half the video is spent in static, not progressing the narrative.
The only other real complaint is the audio, which I can't really blame on you in particular. Your actor's equipment is whats at fault. Other than that, its got decent pacing, and dialog, and does a good job of establishing itself. I'm interested in episode 2.
SullivanWeston 1 year ago
@SullivanWeston thats for the constructive criticism. Comments like this always help us out so that we can improve our machinimas. i will talk to the director on these problems and im sure we will fix some
P.S the voices where like that to sound like a helmet but it sounds more like a radio. The effect has been changed and updated for a more helmet like sound.
distroyer3000 1 year ago
Epic Intro! what did you use to make it?
XTheAllianceX 1 year ago
@XTheAllianceX For the DM intro it was After effects and for the blue team intro it was vegas 8
distroyer3000 1 year ago