Star-ferry-Lai ZIxian
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Pretty professional, sweetie.
The pace is good, good writing to the picture and clear elaboration.
However, it's recommended that your dressing code should be more professional, e.g. with a blazer.
Stand-up should be more natural, you can use some hand gesture for instance.
The narration has a very clear pronounciation. But it would be better if you can lower your voice and be more natural:-)
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Thanks dear, I agree with your points. This video is the first one I did last semester in October. Still need to improve a lot.
laizixian 2 years ago