Left and Right (Original)

I know I need to get a new mic, it helps if you turn the bass down. Pardon the off notes it was early haha

Tell me all your subtleties
And the things I cannot see
My heart and eyes are open
Show me make believe

We'll ride off in the sunset with
The shadow of John Wayne
Or break apart this TV screen
And the pictures it displays

The world that I could show you now
Won't be here for long.
We're a skip on a record just a
Ripple through a pond.

I'm the ghost of a lover
Watching over your shoulder
Saying don't miss out
Just tell her you love her
You look good tonight
Just like every night
Alright, death is calling,
But we're all young, tonight

I'm falling for you left and right
The Captain's lost his will to fight
The war's in the struggle but
But the passion's in the fight

Southern California feels
Good this time of year
Kids all think they're movie stars
As they kiss beneath the pier.

The world that I could show you now
Won't be here for long.
We're a skip on a record just a
Ripple through a pond.
(refrain)
We gotta let go now

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[XxathazagoraphobiaxX]

You know, I've been listening to all of your songs and MY GOD you are wonderful! Every song, without fail, has put a smile on my face like this :) haha. You're songs make girls fall in love with you! (well, thats what happens to me) I hope you make it big, and I dont see why you wouldnt. You have serious talent. I signed in just to tell you how beautiful your songs are and i'm writing you my life story =P well, good luck. I'll keep myself updated with your progress.

[dmb6105]

thank you for your kind words! i'll be sure and let you know when im playin at madison square garden haha :)

[Oswlek]

Another really nice song. I love how you stutter the strumming on the "skip a record" part; highlight it both sonically and metaphorically. Really well done.

[dmb6105]

Haha, I'm glad you noticed it!

[ashlitor08]

this is great :D and i agree you should make a cd

[dmb6105]

thank you! that means alot :) I'm trying to get some more songs written and then I'll prob put a demo out and post some of them on my myspace.

[Thebeatlespinkfloyd2]

Fantastic song, sir. Lyrics and melody are extremely well done. I would love to put a lead to this. But anyways, Great work and keep at it because we need more music like this in the world.

[greennadpurplemusic]

the lyrics to this song inspirational genius

"the war's in the struggle but the passion's in the fight"

[T0LyK]

Incredible. If I were a producer, I would give you a record deal on the spot. Pursue this amazing thing you've got going.

[irish9wolfhound]

sick song man! Sound like Iron and Wine

[Fresharoni]

ill get u dicovered if not trying u got real talent u just need people to hear it

[thurtysevin]

nice work. great rhythm. checking out the rest of your stuff.

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