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Uploaded by on Oct 29, 2009

You know what ? i changed my mind i will just post this as a short story on youtube.
want the next one ? 20 comments XD

Maiden Love Part 1

I was walking around the forest, I wanted to go swim in the river but I looked up at the sky. It was getting late and I promised my father to be home before the night. I held my basket tighter, I was excited and impatient to show my father all the good things I bought from the village. I couldnt believe how much some eggs could bring in exchange.

I was getting closer to our house; it wasnt really a big one more like a really small tinny one, so you couldnt really see it from the forest, thats why my dad built it there. He never liked to live in any village or with other people, and he never really like the previous king. So he thought that building a house off of the kings kingdom would be nice, even thought our house was like 3 meters away from the kingdom. But it was nice because I was able to say *I dont live in this kingdom*

I was finally in front of my house, but unfortunately I wasnt the only one. First I heard men yelling, I recognized my fathers voice, and I quickly hide behind a tree before climbing it so I would be able to see what was going on.

But the only thing I saw was my father arguing with 3 men I didnt know. They started yelling louder and I got scared. The blond one walked closer to my father as he stepped back. *please I swear I dont have money* that was what my father said, which made me understand the whole situation.

Those men wanted money, but we didnt have any. My eyes grew wide of shock as I understood what the repercussions would be.

*dont you dare lie to us!!* The taller one shouted. My dad gulped and shook his head *I swear Im not, Im only a farmer, I dont have money* *really?* my father nodded *sometimes I sell eggs to get some but today I didnt* *oh well thats too bad*

Thats when I saw the blond man getting something; I frowned trying to see what it was. My eyes grew wide of shock when I realized that it was a sword, I let out a small scream which made the men including my father look around *what was that? * The third one asked, the taller one turned back to look at my father *do you live alone or have someone living with you?* my father immediately shook his head *no I dont, I live alone*
Thats when I saw a smirk on his face *really?* he walked toward my dad and held his knife against his neck. *whoever you are show up now or I will kill him!*

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  • OMG! SO DIFFERENT! BUt I LOVE IT! AMAZING! UR AN AWSUM WRITER!!! I SWEAR ItS THE BEST!!!

  • haha thank you :D

  • NOOOOOOOOO!

    omg lol, your like SUPERR WRITERR! "dun dun dun dun duuuuuuuuun" Ahaha your seriously amazing at writingg x

  • haha thanks :D

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  • im gonna re-read the story.. i lost track to this too.. but all i remember is that i think im on the part where demetria and prince joseph was on princess destiny's bday i think or whatever.. all i know gahhh.. i'll just re-read everything.. for a mind refreshment.. hahaha... i seriously love ur stories!! =]

  • Lol, I thought I'd re-read the story and I just noticed that you posted the first episode when it was my birthday xD

    //Peace.Love&&Jemi'

    - Addie

  • wow! A GOOD BEGINNING, i'm saying this, because usual, the first ep (stories, i watch) have these 2 people fall in love and i'm like sick of that, i just want, adventure, action, mystery!

  • it is so good and so different, I loooove it:)

  • amazinggg

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG AWESOMEEE :D

  • Oh no!! This was amazing! I loved it :) haha How do you keep up with all your series! hahaha

  • OMG AWESOME!

  • really interesting :)

  • i already love it! :D

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