My comments:
- Yes I wrote these lyrics by myself, as with all my other "English version" videos. It is NOT a translation of the original song.
- I changed the melody of the verses because it was too low for me. I hope it is to your liking!
- This is my second vid with just audio so I thought I'd take the time to learn how to make subs. hopefully you can see them clearly!
- You can download my version and lyrics below
- I'm sure there are more things I'm forgetting to mention.. I'll mention them as they come up
My version:
http://www.mediafire.com/?awwzgtgzjnc
Lyrics:
http://www.mediafire.com/?m1jmyymr01m
This video:
http://www.mediafire.com/?hkngyxtjoyt
enjoy! =]
Lyrics (c) hoodie09 (not a translation)
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LISTEN
[Verse 1]
There's something that I just gotta know
Why did you leave, why did you pack up and go?
What did I do wrong?
Was it something I said? Was it me all along?
[Verse 2]
I made promises to you and you to me
But I could see it in your face, and just why I couldn't be
The one you needed to see
Oh baby
[Verse 3]
Giving chances, they might all be mistakes
But with you it's a risk I'm always willing to take
Could you say the same to me
Oh honey take me back, I need you babe, I'm beggin' you please
[Verse 4]
Trust that I will make the wrongs into rights
And trust that I will take the past and put it all out of sight
I need you in life
I'll do whatever it takes to make it all alright
[Chorus]
Where have you gone my baby
Don't be too long my baby
Cuz I can't move on my baby
There's something 'bout you I just can't resist
I know that I hurt you deep inside
Please let me make you feel alright
Cuz I'll always need you by my side
And I hope you'll always feel the same
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
I feel like a fool but that's something I'll do for you
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
And I hope that you need me too
[Verse 5]
You'd grab my hand, now and then, and give a little squeeze
And you knew what to do to put my heart at ease
I guess I took too much
I'm regretting it now as I long for your touch
[Verse 6]
Thinkin' back on times we walked in the park
And you'd wrap your arms around me every night it got dark
You know you made me feel safe
And now the only thing I feel is that you're gone without a trace
[Verse 7]
There were times when I just wanted to cry
But then you'd make it all better with your arms opened wide
I feel a hole in my heart
And I'll feel it every day now that we are apart
[Verse 8]
You would think that I would want to move on
But all I ever think about is missing you now
I wish that I could forget
I wish that day had never come, the day that you and I met
repeat [Chorus]
[Bridge]
When I'm without you baby
I can't be without you baby
repeat [Chorus] x2
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
I feel like a fool but that's something I'll do for you
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
And I hope that you need me too
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
I feel like a fool but that's something I'll do for you
OH WHOA OH WHOA, OH WHOA OH OH~
And I hope that you need me too
omo. can I use your lyrics? uhm. can I? can I? I love it.... <3
please?
gagadyl 2 months ago
@gagadyl sure, just give the appropriate credits, thanks =]
hoodie09 2 months ago
the first thing that stuck out to me were the lyrics. they're very beautiful and even though they're different from the original lyrics, they still carry the same painful message.
i loved that you changed the melody. i think that that's something hard for someone to do after they've listened to the original melody of the song. LOL. cause if it were me, i'd revert back to singing the original melody after a few seconds xD
your voice is beautiful btw ♥
KEYmochi 2 years ago
sorry the reply is so late!
thanks for your comments =]
i changed the melody cuz the original melody didn't really suit my vocal range.. it was a bit too low for me heh.
thanks again and hope you continue to watch my vids ^.^
hoodie09 2 years ago
You're one of the few people I listen to, that I actually notice the lyrics before listening to a song a second time.
Very touching
1t4ch1uch1h4 2 years ago
thank you =]
i'm glad to know that people are actually reading the lyrics so carefully! it's a great feeling when you know your lyrics are reaching other people
hoodie09 2 years ago